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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

Okay I have so much to say but less time. Here it goes:

Smitzy, what a comeback for Arnav! Brilliant piece of advice Anjali gives to her brother. When she started to cry looking at the pain in his voice and expression, a small voice inside me was yelling what you wrote next- Arnav has always tried to give Anjali happiness, making sure she never has to cry so why can't she to the same to him? In this brother-sister relationship I see justice done at last. They care for each other equally. Is that possible in real life? Yes in some relationship but not all. As for what she said to him...you redeem yourself the day you make her happy and undo all unwanted actions. Bravo!

Arnav's turmoil was unbearable to see. But after the convo with his sister he seems to have found internal control over what to do or not. His request to Akash to come back with Payal to the RM is the correct first stepwa. Like Anjali said, undo your wrongful actions.

Khushi's thoughts are highly interesting. One member states above that Khushi's character has not grown since the beginning. I would agree and disagree here. Amongst all the family members, I find K very mature in dealing with serious issues...yes, she is childish at times, loving to play pranks, etc. She may have hid the truth of Shyamu from everyone until A's kidnap...but think about it! Most of her actions are very realistic and well-thought off. She isn't the challack walai larki but she is very intelligent. She looks at every one's perspective and thinks for the betterment for everyone. At times, even I feel she hasn't changed much but it's because prior to the K we see in the beginning of the show, life has taught her tough lessons (being an orphan, dealing with people's taunts, etc). Am I looking for some sort of growth in her character again? Yes I do, when she full learns and understands Arnav. The trust she builds by seeing him redeem himself is very important. When I reread what I write I know it won't make much sense but I'll add more later to this analysis.

Acha, back to this FF: Smitzy, you always make me love and laugh at NK + his antics. How he stated that 'sneaky, this is what I am missing' 😆 And another mention here goes to closing the loop with Buaji talking to Khushi to clarify is he did visit her and retelling her side of the story. 👏


Thanks so much dearest fairy! (What is your name btw 😛)

This is the kind of relationship that I always wanted to see between Anjali and Arnav and I'm happy to see I'm able to write of their bond this way.

Yes Anjali has definitely given Arnav some food for thought. Let's see how he works things out.

Your analysis about khushi is interesting to read.. yes she needs to see the trust build up steadily.

I like to close the loops 😉

cheers!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


You asked me why I was shocked to read your comment? Well for starters, it's length 😛 secondly, you have taken the pains to copy paste parts out of the scene... itni mehnat comment likhne ke liye!! *sniff* aa gale lag jaa dost! 🤗

So finally getting down to replying to your comment.

thank you my dear! I'm happy to see the chapter come out like this.. this was like a concentrated dose of emotions wasn't it! Ah man I was feeling a lump in my throat while writing it too. That is why it took so long.. I didn't want an half ass post (I remember saying this before too hahahaa) agar rulana hai to achhe se rulana hai, warna nai 😉

Yes Arnav is broken! He is shattered and only when he realises that Khushi has slipped away from his reach, he is starting to realise what an ass he's been. Hopefully, we'll see him work his ass off to get back to her. His charms won't work on her, that we know. He needs to do things that are meaningful to her. Cornering her or intimidating her will just push her farther away. So ASR apni budhi ka istemaal karega ab.

Khushi to badi anokhi character hai yaar.. she has never done this before.. this yelling back and shutting Arnav away.. so all this seems a little strange to her. she feels guilty when she yells at him because deep down, she still loves him with all her heart. She might have yelled at him that she hates him, but that was her anger talking. Hopefully when ASR starts to try to win her back, she'll remember the way she felt about him.

phew! maine to essay likh diya ab 😛

thanks my darling for such a fabawesome comment!

muah!



Thank you for replying ...mwah !

Btw...I wrote those lines as I remember them after reading your dhaasu scene, I have not copied them at all lol ! Read carefully , you'll be able to make out they're not the same words lol 😛

Love ya work ...love the looking forward to the next one everyday...I know in a few days ...

I really really want to see how he manaos her now ...very intrigued ...especially after you said t will be a surprise he he he ...spoiler Haan !
Edited by asr13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

OMG!

You just broke me today. You just did.😭
That was just...

I actually have tears...they just trickled.
This was just heartbreaking, heart-wrenchingly painful to read.
You have outdone urself in every which way. You just have.

That was just Beautifully written all the way.👏
The way you expressed the emotions that Arnav was going through was...i had a lump in my throat.

The moment i started reading and he had the ring in his hand, i knew this time he would just break down
And he did.
The way he questioned if he was bad, the way he said that all he had given her was hurt and nothing else, the way he just cried, broke me down too.😭

You have potrayed Anajli in the best way one can.
Understanding, supportive and strong.The way she comforted him, the way she made him understand that love is greater than hate, that his love was greater than her hate, that when he would see her smile he would start forgiving himself, that there was only one true love and one should never let go of it.

I just want to give a big hug to Arnav now. I just do.🤗

Thank god u let Khushi know that he was there hounding Buaji in the middle of the night. That he was there a few hrs ago and now here, just to see her.
Khushi really needs to think her felings through. I know she confused cause one moment he said he hated her and the next he was after her asking for forgiveness.

Sankeswar! That made me smile for a bit.😊

But again Arnav convo with Akash was made me go all sad again. The way Arnav was pleading him and Payal to come home. He just wants his family back, the happiness back that was broken due to a piece of lie.

And NK is always there to make the day brighter.

Can you just tell me how can i hate/be angry at Arnav after this. I just cant. He has certainly realised his mistakes and is paying for it in a way that hes not close to her, thinking that hes lost her.

But tbh the guy has actually tried to change, no he changed himself so that he could be worthy of Khushi(thats what he thought) to adapt to every situation placed in front of him. He has definitely changed over time, a character growth, which i admire especially the past, the way life has treated him.

Im waiting for the next meeting of Arnav and Khushi and thats gonna be heartbreaking as ever.

Kudos to you Smitzy👏 *bows down
This update goes above and beyond all others, and theres more to come.
*sigh, i really need to breath.


Muah!

PS - I dont even have energy left to be angry at u for updating soo late. This update has just drained me.



ahhh Shwetha!!! 🤗

How do you write such long comments woman! You know I've kept this for the last to reply to 😛

awww my dear! You cried!! I cried too *sniff* This was an emotional piece to write.. and I could feel a lump in my throat all through! Yes i know it is difficult to hate ASR now.. maybe I don't want people to hate him now that he has realised his mistakes.. now Khushi needs to clear her mind as well.

well next meeting of Arnav khushi will be entertaining for sure.. I'm done with writing sad updates for a while 😉

cheers!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: babli0204

HATS OFF smitzy!!!

Unlike the show your FF is showing character development. They are now more real-life people!! Arnav changed so much making his feelings open to Anjali and also to some extnet to Akash, Khushi also instead of sticking to her stubbornness, feelng bad for him!!!

Just hope Arnav will not give up all hope, and neither will Khushi!!

THANKS A LOT for the PM!!!!!!!


Thanks so much for your lovely comment dear! 😊

Fingers crossed dear! I hope they both make it through once and for all!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asr13

Thank you for replying ...mwah !

Can I just correct you ...I wrote those lines as I remember them after reading your dhaasu scene, I have not copied them at all lol ! Read carefully , you'll be able to make out they're not the same words lol 😛

Love ya work ...love the looking forward to the next one everyday...I know in a few days ...

I really really want to see how he manaos her now ...very intrigued ...especially after you said t will be a surprise he he he ...spoiler Haan !


You know mera khana hazam nahi hota if I don't reply to your lovely feedbacks dear.. and it is only fair that I do because you take the time and the pains to write your emotions 🤗

and you REMEMBERED the lines 😲 amazing dear! 👏

spoiler hahaha.. ahem ahem.. aage aage dekho hota hai kya 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy


You know mera khana hazam nahi hota if I don't reply to your lovely feedbacks dear.. and it is only fair that I do because you take the time and the pains to write your emotions 🤗

and you REMEMBERED the lines 😲 amazing dear! 👏

spoiler hahaha.. ahem ahem.. aage aage dekho hota hai kya 😉🤗


Awww senti kar ditta tussi ...hug ke liye aaja kudiye ! 🤗
Oho remember toh hona hi hai na, ab itna impactful jo hai ... And especially this whole chapter ...ek ke baad ek bouncer tha boss ...too good ! 👏
I haven't felt the way I felt after reading your updates in a long long time ...not that I get much time to read now, but iske liye toh I take time out ...can't live without IPK !

Edited by asr13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

you are too good...keep up the good work...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy

ahhh Shwetha!!! 🤗

How do you write such long comments woman! You know I've kept this for the last to reply to 😛

awww my dear! You cried!! I cried too *sniff* This was an emotional piece to write.. and I could feel a lump in my throat all through! Yes i know it is difficult to hate ASR now.. maybe I don't want people to hate him now that he has realised his mistakes.. now Khushi needs to clear her mind as well.

well next meeting of Arnav khushi will be entertaining for sure.. I'm done with writing sad updates for a while 😉

cheers!



Tbh..i seriously dont knw!

Didnt know that i wrote this long of a comment until i posted!😆
Looks like i wrote everything i felt!
Bada maza ayaa hoga padhne mein!

LOL...I'm honoured!

Edited by ipkkndfanforeva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva



Tbh..i seriously dont knw!

Didnt know that i wrote this long of a comment until i posted!😆
Looks like i wrote everything i felt!
Bada maza ayaa hoga padhne mein!

LOL...I'm honoured!

I swear pata hi nahi chalta hai 😆 ...likhte jate hain ...bas !
smitzy must be giggling away ki ye dono pagal phir shuru ho gaye ...maine kaha main busy hoon ..phir bhi !!! lol Tongue
did u see shyamu ka bhaanda phod ka trailor btw ?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asr13

I swear pata hi nahi chalta hai 😆 ...likhte jate hain ...bas !
smitzy must be giggling away ki ye dono pagal phir shuru ho gaye ...maine kaha main busy hoon ..phir bhi !!! lol 😛
did u see shyamu ka bhaanda phod ka trailor btw ?



Seriously she really must think we are mad!

Hum jab bhi baat karna shuru karte hain, v just go on and on and on!😆

Yea, youtube pe dekha!
And kya feel aaya! 😃 I mean i got so excited! Shyam getting slapped again and that too by Anjali!
Soo cant wait for the episode!

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