FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 86

Originally posted by: asr13

Did I say the earlier update was heart wrenching ...I was wrong, you've again outdone yourself !!!

Awesome , simply awesome ...

I had a lump in my throat when he asks main itna bura hoon di ? Khushi ka teer barabar nishane pe laga boss, Ab dard ho raha hai bitwa ko ...but me fells bad too. ..sniff sniff ... 😭

It broke my heart to see the mighty ASR breaking down like this, serves him right yes...but nonetheless !

I love your Anjali, love her for encouraging him ki apne pyar ko wapas le ke aao Chotey, love the way she reconfirms with him first ki tum abhi bhi Khushiji se utna hi pyar karte ho ? Love the way she says ki Kya unki nafrat tumhare pyar se badkar hai ?

...love the way she says ki pehle apne aap ko maafi ke layak banao ...

Take a bow smitzy ! 👏

Khushi's actually feeling bad for him (typical !!! ) ...she feels empty from within ki itna suna diya, unhone phir bhi kuch nahi kaha, kuch nahi kiya ... hame acha kyun nahi lag raha hai ...naah darling !

Ye resignation wala repeat telecast hua hai Sankadevi, apko Lau hua hai, Lau mein aisa hi hota hai 😆 ...waise bhi Laad Governor baar baar aisa mauka nahi denge, so chill ...par kahan !

Love the way she doesn't approve of Buaji throwing him out in the middle of the night ...made me smile ...so typical ...ye mere aur mere pati ke beech ki Baat hai types ! Love her 😳

Aah Sankeshwar raat bhar pareshan the has made her more pareshan too lol😆

So redemption started Haan ...Bang on Arnav bitwa, Ab dill pe lagi hai na, Ab dimag ki batti barabar jal rahi hai ...hain na ?

Love the way you are getting him to erase the wounds one by one, love the way he requests Akash to get Payal home, and the best bit was ...he doesn't say his usual trademark because-I-want-to, it's because she belongs there ...wow !

Which is why I say what I say, we love to hate ASR don't we ?

but we just cannot handle when he suffers, unka ek aansu hamare dil ko hazar baar chot pahunchata hai ...har baar ...we love him too much dammit !!!

Proud to be a stalker today !!!🤗

Originally posted by: jtammareddy

Awesome update. Agony of loosing ur love . Pity Arnav for that . People don't realize the importance of a person in their life some times until they loose them. Till know Arnav's anger and ego preceded over his heart but as he realized his mistakes he will do everything to prove and move himself worthy of her love again.

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

I am Back...😃 lol

Ok...

Chapter 13 Scene 2

Khushi's POV:- I have never thought that someday I will read her POV and not smile...The feeling of sadness and loneliness that her words had...like she was somehow disconnected with her existence...and they only time she was herself when she thought about him...and maybe that is why she was not herself all the time...(I am not making sense, Am I?)

But though, that made me speechless...Wow...👏

CHAPTER 13 Scene 3

"Gupta Singh Raizada" Awww...But you know what dude? She is only a "Gupta" now, and its all your doing...😒

I was constantly thinking who he will meet first? Payal or Garima? because meeting Khushi is quite not possible as Ma Lady, we all are in a lil bit cruel mood for ASR...😉 lol

After reading this --> "Woo theek hai ab. Behosh hain," Garima whispers back, touched by his concern...I laughed so much...🤣 yaar how selfish human beings are nahi? He was so worried about his Khushi and Garima is thinking that he was there for her husband...😆 even If he knew it was her father who was in ICU he would have still worried for Khushi...how she is feeling...we are selfish creature indeed, be it for ourselves or the people we love...

"Mujhe kisi ne kuch bataya kyun nahin?" he suddenly shouts...Aww, ASR...(Am I they only one who was going crazy during reading this? I mean, I was confused, Should I feel sympathy or do all serves-you-right-dude...or laugh because, that was funny, as ASR being ASR, didn't hear who the hell was in ICU but sitting there he was feeling self-pity and saying "Damnit" here and there...😆 lol)

Ma Lady, that was cruel stopping that...Are you doing your home-work already as you have to write about Mr.Snakewa in near future? 😲 lol

Chapter 14

Hhahah, OH God, Arnav is crazy when it comes to Khushi...🤣

First he was all..."Okey, she is fine...she is fine..." and then "why is she fine when I was TOLD she wasn't?" and then Payla's entry..."You!" and The ASR was Back... And when he realized, it was he who misunderstood, he Laughs woh bhi Khushi ke samne...Ah, ASR..ASR...😒 lol

Ch14 Sc2:-

I knew he will do something like this to make sure she hears what he has to tell her...he is ASR after all...😈 lol

But This Chapter was a sad one...Glad that Khushi showed him that she had enough with all this...She won't take all the crap from now on...be it from him or anyone else...he can't break her and then come back thinking everything will be ok...I was all "Gooo Khushi" till I read how hurt he was...God why does this happens to me? I was all "Okey, now he crossed his limts, I am All team Khushi from now on" and the moment I read about how much he is hurting, I am team Arnav again, actually I am team ASR, who is never un-fair, who Never stops usig his brain, who is logical...and then Arnav's trust on his stupid Dadi,Jiju and etc and always ruins everything...why he can't be ASR when any of these stupid snakes that he feeds, comes and tells him lies and ruins his life? God...!!!!

Ma Lady all of these part were Fab-awesome as always...Had so much fun reading them after a long time...I can't wait for this Track to finished for 2 reasons...1st, I am never fair with Khushi in tracks like these as I feel for ASR more then her...2nd Hhaha...I have to see Mr.Snakewa's Barbadi...😈 You know how much I am in HATE with him, even thinking about he Barbadi makes me go crazy from excitement...🤪 LOL

Originally posted by: dpotnis

I like the way the story is turning out. Arnav has to really feel how much he has hurt her. And this is the Anjali we wanted to see in the serial. One who really behaves like a older sister rather than throwing tantrums for her own needs.

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Arnav is a product of his circumstances... I know Khushi lost her parents too but arnav lost much more than parents that fateful night! He has grown a lot, he realises his mistake and is so broken thinking he has lost her... Yes he should have trusted her but I can now see from his POV... I want her to forgive him...but then...should she not so easily ...but should pride come into this...or is it self respect... ?.she can not doubt his love for her...no one can...but one suffers they both suffer, And are only happy with each other,!

Loved it loved it!

Originally posted by: soniachammu

No feedback will be given how dare u give such a intense scenes and light ones so easily no am not giving any feedback

Originally posted by: kbtr

Well, well. So finally he is thinking about how much he has hurt her. Is that enough? If his actions belie his words, it is quite useless. I haven't seen him do anything to make amends to right his wrong where Kushi is concerned. For Akash, is Arnav telling him to come back for Akash's sake, or for Arnav's sake. After all, if Payal is with the Raizadas, then Kushi when visiting will come face to face with him one day. You see, I don't trust him. He always does thing to suit his own convenience. And if he is really genuine, then I still don't trust him. Can Kushi trust him? What's to say he won't do something similar the next time there is a hiccup? How will he change that?

I don't like the way Kushi is thinking. I hope she does not forgive him so easily.

BTW, I'm still waiting for their next meeting. I hope she does not warm towards him.

Thanks for the PM.😃

Originally posted by: christmas

that was very nicely written. all the emotions and anguish on arnavs part was so tangible. its really sad. and perhaps i might be going against the grain. but i really dont know how much of this gried and loneliness is fair for him. if this was all during the beginning i would completely understand, but they more so khushi chose to let go of the past meaning the ill treatment post sheesh mahal falling in love. everything else now it just seems like he is the guy who is stuck in between with short end of the stick regardless of whichever side he chose. guy who is stuck in trying to make sure he is protecting and keeping happy either his di or khushi or his family and losing his somewhere in between. all this is not to say that khushi's anger is unjustified. it is completely valid. its culmination of everything that has happened and tipping point has just gone. either way. lovely stoy. continue soon

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

it was a beautiful update...khushi trying to understand the predicament arnav is in...arnav feeling really guilty and i LOVE ur anjali...she utters extremely sensible words out of her mouth...so how much more time arnav and khushi ll take to get back together...m NOT complaining just curious to know...coz after that we ll be witnessing last journey of SHYAM MANOHAR JHA... :D and the bro-mance at the end was too good to handle ;P

thanks for pm :)

Originally posted by: pup03

What a heart wrenching chapter...both are in pain...so finally Arnav have started mission Khushi ko khush karo andolan and first thing he did by asking Aakash to bring Payal home...lets see how he wins her back...lets hope for best...😊