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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: sumali
awesome update!
Usually , in any FFs, I don't enjoy reading abt other couples as much as I relish Arnav & Kushi, but today, I loved reading abt Aakash & Paayal. Such an understanding couple.

Both Arnav & Kushi, though love each other madly, their ego stops them from admitting and make them miserable. Hoping for happy days to come again.

thanks a lot! I like to write about all the characters actually.. my stumped sense of humor makes it difficult to write about NK though 😆 I'm glad you like it!

cheers! 😊

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saarah96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

amazing updatee

wonder whats guna happen in lucknow now

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Annie12
I loved this twist. I think it is absolutely natural and healthy to take a break fom a relationship that has brought so much turmoil to ones life.. Not through anyone's fault. Sometimes a break and thinking things through and calming down, taking a backseat for sometime and watching life go by ... Gives you a perception that wasn't possible while driving through life rashly.

Thanks Annie for a brilliant comment! 👏

Yeah you are absolutely right! When everything goes pear shaped, it's always better to stand still for a minute and take a breath, analyse what went wrong rather than keep on pushing things..

Most of the time, people can not bear to see the Arshi couple apart, maybe in my next FF I'll be able to write something which does

cheers! 😊

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva
Damnit!
We're back to square 1! No, actually i think its worse than that!
Seriously, what the hell is happening.
tbh honest i want to fast forward and move ahead.
This drama is taking a toll on me!🤪
I mean soo much bloody pain!
Damn you Creepwa! ur the idiot who started it all and thank u Dadiji for participating in it too!😳
If Arnav has taken an oath not to be affected, hes definitely goin to be harsh on Khushi!
Though i like Khushi's oath, to be strong!😊
Payal and Akash are soo strong! nice to see someone making sense!
Dreading the Lucknow confrontation! (bt i think they will ignore each other)
Lucknow, where it all began!❤️
the circle completes and starts again!
Fantastic Update yaar!👏

Thank you sweetheart for such a long lovely comment! You made my day! 😊

awww I know it is getting slightly dramatic now.. but imagine had this actually happened on the serial.. you would have been completely hooked na? 😃

See, when I write, I try to keep one scene dramatic and rest 2 scenes mellowed down to cushion it.. this time unfortunately, all the drama pooled in in the first scene itself 😆

Don't dread about lucknow .. everything started there! that's all I can say 😉

I'll try not to give you anymore heartburn from the drama (not in the next scene at least muhahahaha)

cheers darling! 🤗

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: kbtr
Loved it!
I loved this scene. I love how you have his personal life encroach his professional life. And, how he recognizes this. Now that they are both aware of their hurt, (first step to conscious understanding,) perhaps they'll appreciate that they really can't do without each other, and begin making amends about it. I would love for him to go back to her, after all, he was the one who broke it off. No matter he apologized, he did leave her half way at the altar! And I am so happy that you are making the full circle going back to Lucknow. I really can't wait to see how it all unfolds. I wish that he would lose control in front of her, for her. Is he going to start wooing her?
Can't wait, can NEVER wait for your next scene. They are always so heart wrenching!
Thanks for the update and tfs. 😃

I love reading your comments dear 😊 They are such a treat.. you think beyond what i portray in the scene to actually what these characters might be feeling had they been alive (like in real life).. So you are actually able to imagine things as they are moving along (which means, part of my job is done successfully 😊)

You like to see Khushi as the heroine rather than being the victim right? so do I! So that makes the two of us in the same boat along with Khushi and her Devi Maiyya. I think we both know what would happen to poor Arnav in such a situation 😆

cheers dear! stay tuned for the next one!

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust
CONGRATULATIONS on this new thread!👏🥳

I was away for two day therefore I didn't get a chance to comment on or read the updates. But WOW! I had missed out on a lot of action.The huge Arshi argument was so unexpected but maybe much needed to get their feelings out. I felt it was so much like IPK's early after-Arshi marriage episode. The 'I hate you' would lead to more misunderstandings and anger.

But now we go back to where the story began - Lucknow. I am so happy to see they both were determined or stubborn on not letting this incident affect them. Khushi's all pumped to be happy and move on. But Arnav, I feel, is moving backwards to being less trusting on others and staying by himself personality. Hope the pooja and treatment for Bauji leads to some happiness. Oh and the Payal-Akash scene was sweet. It is good to read what's cooking in Payal's mind. She is after all an important character too.

hey fairy!! thanks a lot! 😊 I was wondering where you disappeared off to! Yep the argument was needed to get their feelings out of the way. The biggest problem with these two characters is their problem of communication.. they never say things out straight forward and to the point.. which leads to most of the problems between them. He says something, she understands something else. She says something, he understands something else.

Yes, we head back to Lucknow now.. where it all began. Hope it teaches them talk it out at least!

cheers dear! 😊

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Punkin22
Lovely written post. Lucknow here we come. Everyone together surprise and wait for the explosion. Khushi broke my heart with, I'm alone. Sad moments for Arnav and Khushi. The MU has to go!!!! Thank you for post and pm...

I agree!! MU has to go!! but how? and when? 😉

think think! I'm going to put this up as a contest after the next scene hehehehee

cheers!

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: babli0204
Lucknow...here they come...to finish all the MUs (hopefully)!!!!!
So beatifully written...Arnav's strong resolution: "Aaj ke baad se main kabhi khud ko itna weak nahin hone dunga. I will not allow anyone to affect me this way" and the next day his sense of sorrow and desperation at the office culminates in the one single emotion he can express openly very well...anger!!!!!!!!!!!!
and Khushi's painful reliastion of utter loneliness, and a fighter that she is, she is relying helplessly to her Devi Maiyaa: "Aaj ke baad se kisi ko bhi humare aankhon mein ek bhi aansu lane nahin denge Devi Maiyya, aapki kasam,"
I has a lump in my throat while reading this!!!!!!!!!!!
Waitng for the Lucknow part already!!!!!!!!
Thanks a lot of the PM.