FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122

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VasantiLad

@VasantiLad

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Smita

Well done you were building the suspense like the crest of a wave & I kep wondering when the crash was gonna happen - when were they going to meet- wow - i loved this bit at the end - same as when it ends in the epi on a crucial bit

Before Khushi can open her mouth, Arnav covers the distance between them in two long strides and to her utter shock wraps his arms around her. He pulls her close in an embrace, his hands caressing her head. He takes slow deep breaths, almost as if he is sighing in relief, his face buried in the curve of her neck. Then as his weight sags on her, he whispers croakily, his voice awash with anguish.

"Khushi... Tum theek ho?"

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Annie12

@Annie12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Smitzy awesomeness. ... This chapter was crackling with intensity.. I was feeling as anxious as Arnav...superb!,

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

After reading the last line has cracked up laughing because I could so imagine Arnav saying that! I can't wait for Khushi to come out of shock! That'll one heck of an update!!! I adored this update!!! Thanks for the PM!!!

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Princessbride

@Princessbride

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Smitzy, you brought tears to my eyes with the end !

I love how you seamlessly drew a connection between the safety instructions on the flight and Arnav's memories, how everything reminds him only of Khushi. Also loved how you conveyed the sense of urgency by the way you write...I, too, was impatient for Arnav to get to the hospital. so I gobbled up this chapter really fast! I will read it again slowly and savour it this time...

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shivamala

@shivamala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Excellent waiting for the next one, I feel sorry to do this to you, but what can I do you always stop the story when its getting interesting.

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

awesome update

loved it

You are one exceptional writer……love the way this story is progressing…….so far you have shown so many different emotions with each chapter…..just simply superb

Waiting for the next update eagerly

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Natasha333

@Natasha333

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Wooww...Superb Update...u write very well...👏

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

What a beautiful chapter...could feel his pain and anguish through the flight..in everything he saw and felt! The words were beautiful...I know u want long feedback... But am as shocked as Khushi right now...

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mad

@*mad*

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

hahahaha
i like that drivers reaction.. yeah arnav seems like a mad man so the money can be fake...
hahahhah...it is soo cute to read that part with dhad dhad.. i always like that part..
so now when he ask khushi if she is alright, and when he he is going to realize he just made a fool of himself... it will be fun...now i suppose he is going to apologize and she is going to walk away.. and there start ASR all attitude in a war path to bring back his wife..

so you better be a very good at bullying ok