FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 57

Originally posted by: segad

Bit of schadenfreude at Arnav's suffering I see.

Nice chapter though

Originally posted by: daniclayton

loved it. brilliant... u s'd publish

Originally posted by: *mad*

What did u do to arnav???? 😲
here I am ready to read about all the ways you were planning on bullying him and he didnt even come?

Yaar...how long are we suppose to wait?
As for khushi.. yeah... this grl is totally crazy... otherwise why would she be praying for a guy like arnav?

Originally posted by: kbtr

Thank-you smitzy. For giving us Kushi's feelings. I was so looking forward to finding out about what is happening with Kushi.It seems from Kushi's monologue, that she's going to forgive him easily. I hope not!!! You have captured her warring emotions so beautifully. There is a battle brewing inside of her due to her conflicting emotions. I hope it spills over when she finally does meet Arnav. And blasts him to Kingdom Come!!! (I'm remembering bhar may gai aap aur bhar may gai aapki nokri!)

You have a fabulous way with words to describe things. I could actually visualize the streets of Lucknow in the early morning. I could actually hear the sounds of the awakening city. I actually felt I was there! 👏

Thanks for the update. Cannot wait for the next scene. The next longer scene!😃

Originally posted by: Punkin22

Powerful and sad update. Khushi's mind is always with him, even when she doesn't realize. Like when she was praying. Devi Maiyya must smile when she hears Khushi's prayers. She has a few surprises in store. Remarkable writing.

Thank you for post and pm.

Originally posted by: babli0204

Best part of waking up and starting my laptop in the monrings, especially on a holiday like today (it is holidy in my country on 3rd oct)...Smitzy's updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love you for this dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
THANKS a lot for the PM!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Smitzzyy🤗

Aww...this was such a sweet update!
A very calm one, like the one that happens before the storm comes!
I bet agla vala dhamakedaar hoga!😉

You know what i just love Khushi...she just makes me smile!😃
Her personality, her outlook on life, her positivity, her smiling even though things are not going her way...

When she sub-conciously prayed to Devi Maiyya abt Arnav...it tugged my heart yaar...i mean the guy is still all over her brain, even after all that has happened!
She just loves him too much, and theres not even a hint of anger when she thinks abt the past...just sadness.

Now, after this im really annoyed at Arnav...the 2nd part of the flashback, shaadi vaala just reminded me how wrong he was, and the way he treated her!

I know you wont make Khushi accept him easily, but still...make him beg, will you?🤔

Eagerly waiting for the next one!😃

And yes Thanks for Khushis POV!

Muah!😳

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

Awww Khushi jaan! I am feeling like punching Arnav now. I am so glad we got to see some of the events from Khushi's perspective. To see through her eyes helps readers understand her feelings and thoughts. They way she almost prayed for Arnav and pulled back was so funny...they way she sat in her bed looking around and thinking of happy times was sad and refreshing...and best part the way she haggled with the auto driver for lower rates😆 That's our Khushi Kumari Gupta.

Btw, did you visit Lucknow? Or did you just draw the image of the city from what you have read?