OS: Arshi : Delirious - Page 2

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Beautiful! Its raining sad Os es in the forum--a clear indication of where all of our minds are --man, we are terrified about the upcoming track! This was beautiful, and so poignant...Truly a touching piece. Can I have a link to your index? if you've written anything else I'd love to read them all.

Originally posted by: asr13

Awww can't say much *sob*sob*

Beautiful work smitzy, I am no expert but can confidently say you have a strong potential, not everyone can move people to tears with their writing ...Esp if it's a short story ...brilliant !!!

And thanks for the warning hun !

Oh now your " why don't you come to me Khushi ?" is going to haunt me for many many days ...

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it is really nice FF...the way you have describe arnavs behavior and even ramu kaka's emotions... when i read the last part...when khushi came to him in his dreams...😭 i really felt sorry for him

but im feeling scared now... cos it can become a reality as well with shyams madness... but yeah i expect arnav to behave just like this if he lose khushi

Why are you killing me by writing sad OS's

Send Arnav to his Khushi

Originally posted by: amanithami96

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that was fantastic! the end, when he waspoutingandasking ramu kaka, omg my eyes filled with tears. i felt so sorry, i mean... it was too good and so sad...

job very well done.

Originally posted by: *mad*

it is really nice FF...the way you have describe arnavs behavior and even ramu kaka's emotions... when i read the last part...when khushi came to him in his dreams...😭 i really felt sorry for him
but im feeling scared now... cos it can become a reality as well with shyams madness... but yeah i expect arnav to behave just like this if he lose khushi

Heart wrenching ... so sad yet so beautiful

Originally posted by: ligidha

Oh God...It will break my heart if i happen to see Arnav in this state...