Arhi OS: Grown Ocean *THE END* NEW note -pg17*

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nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

This was amazing! Please update soon! :) And Dadi and Anjali can go jump into a well or something. So bloody irritating!

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

that was awesome..loved it.. 😊

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sofiaroth

@sofiaroth

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

holly molly!!! that was great! and so true.anjali ke tiny brain mai yahi baat jani thi bas!!

waiting for the next part.hurry!:D

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raina

@Girlabouttown

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

amazing...

Lets see which way Cv's go.

I liked the Arnav in your story how he shut Dadi up.

Waiting for the second part now.

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Laila

@Edella17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

This is Fabolous Bushra (Hope I can call you that)

Please please continue this , I am eagerly wishing that Anjlai acts smart once and Arnav marries Khushi...

Someone please hack this dadi , she is just too annoying , A complete cow

Waiting impatiently for the next part

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654772

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

MORE!!! MORE!! And I shall haunt you if your don;t continue ripped soon! W*F bey!

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Siham

@sihu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

THis was just fantastic and I just hope Arnav responds to Dadi just as u've written in ur OS...but please dont leave us hanging...please continue.

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awesome OS - Please PM me for the 2nd part.

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Damn...why can't anjali think straight for once?

Arghh...i hate the character Shyam.😡

But i liked ur idea.

ASR seems really confused.

I'd definitly like to knw how this would end.😊

I really missed ur updates of RIPPED.

I hope u continue soon

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-Devanshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Oh how I wish i could see this!!This was some brilliant work!!i could imagine everything happening and the sadistic pleasure that i got when he gripped his dadi's arms and told her to get out...i cant even express it in words!!

I'll be frank...I want them to separate for a while because I think they both deserve a break but when I read this OS...ohmigosh...if it goes like this...I am all for the re-marriage!!oh these two people have made me so damn undecisive...one moment i read this and i want the re-marriage now after some time im gonna find another OS where Arnav's pain will be highlighted and I will want them to separate yet again!!#RantEnd

I would really really love it if you continue with it!!