OS: Apshakun (Ill-Fated One) WRITER's NOTE PG 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: napstermonster
SO YEAH. FOR THE FIRST TIME I'M TRULY HATING THIS SHOW---HATING THE POSSIBLE RUINATION OF AN INNOCENT WOMAN.

Given today's episode, this OS is now a very real possibility. I wrote this before seeing today's episode, obviously, and now, I am literally shaking with the realization that it could very well be a prophetic take on the future track.

That he took her innocence. That she'll be literally left at the altar. And that he'll leave her, and she'll be...Vaidehi.

I cannot tell you guys how sad it makes me--that something I penned., something as sad and cruel as this now has a 50/50 chance of coming true on my favorite show. Through my favorite hero. Not much of a hero, if she's alone and defenseless, and pregnant with his child now, is he?

God, women are damned, damned in all possible ways.

My heart constricts at the thought. I can't bear to think about it so I've been avoiding the thoughts. Your OS can very well come true. I loved it but I don't want it to happen for real. Simply because Khushi deserves every bit of happiness that she has been denied. If she had been given 0.000000001% of the TLC everyone gave Anjali, she would have been over the moon. In spite of how miserably her "family" have treated her, she would still jump off a cliff happily for them. The only person who has truly, unconditionally loved her is her father. And the only true friend she has is NK. It is because of these two characters that I still hope... my naive heart thinks that maybe they can save her from falling into the pit she's bound to fall into. But still my fingers are crossed.

Oh and before I forget, please read this and tell me what you think! Pretty please? With cherries on top?

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

really heartbreakingly beautiful..very poignantly written

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

This was heart wrenching and very emotional.

Good OS.

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Preeti

@preetihere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Seriously this was scary - am glad they didnt show anything like this ... and to think of the countless women who have faced this!
Intense writing!

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Beautifully written OS but was very very sad one ... 😭

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

waaah
i wa having a crappy day and came and read this... now how do i stop these tears??

this was one of the scenarios i builtup when they were doing the vampire scream.. and to see it written out in such heartbreaking detail ... ((hugs))

very well written.👏