OS: Apshakun (Ill-Fated One) WRITER's NOTE PG 15 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum di
loved it
its so beautifully
i wept lyk a baby
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Posted: 13 years ago
will you update do update na
i want to know more
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh My... *Speechless*

Wow. That was. Just. Wow.

Applause for you. Great work. :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very emotional. Difficult to read without shedding tears. Well done for a beautifully written OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
SO YEAH. FOR THE FIRST TIME I'M TRULY HATING THIS SHOW---HATING THE POSSIBLE RUINATION OF AN INNOCENT WOMAN.

Given today's episode, this OS is now a very real possibility. I wrote this before seeing today's episode, obviously, and now, I am literally shaking with the realization that it could very well be a prophetic take on the future track.

That he took her innocence. That she'll be literally left at the altar. And that he'll leave her, and she'll be...Vaidehi.

I cannot tell you guys how sad it makes me--that something I penned., something as sad and cruel as this now has a 50/50 chance of coming true on my favorite show. Through my favorite hero. Not much of a hero, if she's alone and defenseless, and pregnant with his child now, is he?

God, women are damned, damned in all possible ways.


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Posted: 13 years ago
You know, I just read this one today and then, hallelujah, we have today's episode. I would like to think they just kissed, because if it is the other case, I can totally see where the show is going. Not that they can afford to let Khushi die, but still, your OS and the epi did give me the creeps. I don't know what to say, I am too disturbed right now. I would have enjoyed both this OS and today's epi greatly if I hadn't seen the stupid past promo going around nowadays. Right now I can only see the impending doom you have envisioned. & yes, you are right. Khushi will take the brunt of it all. Being a woman , that too on nayi soch wala Star Plus, when has she not?

Also, I now understand that towel-rubbing Sallu baba style seems to do wonders on ASR's hitherto non-existent/non-fruitful libido. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: napstermonster

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">SO YEAH. FOR THE FIRST TIME I'M TRULY HATING THIS SHOW---HATING THE POSSIBLE RUINATION OF AN INNOCENT WOMAN.

Given today's episode, this OS is now a very real possibility. I wrote this before seeing today's episode, obviously, and now, I am literally shaking with the realization that it could very well be a prophetic take on the future track.

That he took her innocence. That she'll be literally left at the altar. And that he'll leave her, and she'll be...Vaidehi.

I cannot tell you guys how sad it makes me--that something I penned., something as sad and cruel as this now has a 50/50 chance of coming true on my favorite show. Through my favorite hero. Not much of a hero, if she's alone and defenseless, and pregnant with his child now, is he?

God, women are damned, damned in all possible ways.

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U r absolutely right and I just read an article that Khushi's gonna go missing on her wedding day bcz Arnav will be a no show or something... Damn these creatives we can't even have a happy ever after in reel life as well... We see women suffering in real life all the time but we have to see on tv as well... Is anybody ever gonna show the mirror to these freaking demented Raizada family sometime soon,some home truths may be that what a psycho Arnav's mum was for commiting suicide on his daughter's wedding day over her husband's affair or what a pathetic cheating scum his dad was for hiding his marital status from her or the mental Dadi who is like a typical mum putting all the blame on the second woman... I mean really a girl's love,feelings and honour is so easy to toss aside for a past which she had nothing to do with.
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Posted: 13 years ago
After being mind-fu*ked ever since Anjali's miscarriage, nothing can shock me anymore.

This piece of writing was beautiful. It was sad, heart wrenching and bitterly blunt. But that is how life is too sometimes; painful and bitterly blunt.

kudos! 👏


PS- please PM for your next fic!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh gosh i cried and cried, so heart touching and sad. Kudos to you as a writer.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: napstermonster

SO YEAH. FOR THE FIRST TIME I'M TRULY HATING THIS SHOW---HATING THE POSSIBLE RUINATION OF AN INNOCENT WOMAN.

Given today's episode, this OS is now a very real possibility. I wrote this before seeing today's episode, obviously, and now, I am literally shaking with the realization that it could very well be a prophetic take on the future track.

That he took her innocence. That she'll be literally left at the altar. And that he'll leave her, and she'll be...Vaidehi.

I cannot tell you guys how sad it makes me--that something I penned., something as sad and cruel as this now has a 50/50 chance of coming true on my favorite show. Through my favorite hero. Not much of a hero, if she's alone and defenseless, and pregnant with his child now, is he?

God, women are damned, damned in all possible ways.



It would be devastating if this comes true. I mean it would so painful for her to go through all that, just because of some past, that doesnt even hold any importance today, because leaving he,r wouldnt bring back his parents.

If the CVs do go through this path, I would want them to make Khushi strong, and independent. I would want her to try and survive, and find a job, live with her head held high. And not give him another chance, because Men like him do not deserve one.
BUt Alas, this is fiction, and women so empowering would make it a boring read for most in our society, and so I know what will happen, and I dread, my friend, for that to come.

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