OS: Apshakun (Ill-Fated One) WRITER's NOTE PG 15

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chavvi16

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Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

wow man was that poweful emotional story huh
such a tragic ending huh
hope to god this dont happen in show
but can khushi llive through this time if he rejects her
we all know she is strong but is human after all

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Shruti

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

That was so emotional plus painful
Very nicely penned down

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Syca

@Syca

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Omg that was really emotional, beautifully written OS thanks for the pm

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gkoolans

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Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

a heart breaking start but none the less a powerful one. dont stop please... continue...I want the Apshakun turn into something glorious and precious.

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Oh my GOD that was so emotional
Hope asr don't break the marriage in the show

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

oh my god.. this was intense.. so many women in india meet this ill fate without any mistake from their end.

beautifully written..

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

I simply wanna say W-O-W !!

That was amazing !!
especially, I love angsty stuff ! Not that I dont swoon over your Perfection, but this one was wow !

Especially the end, where the gardener asks Arnav not to touch the tombstone !
Gosh ! It hit over there like Pang !

And the emotions , the various stages you've made Khushi go through !
Loved it !

Can you write one from Arnav's POV too ??
If not its Ok !

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S.B.

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Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

This was so emotional.. hats off to you for this fantastic OS

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@debby_11

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

A very beautiful painful OS...Loved it :)

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haminasto

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

WOW!!!...no i mean yes its very sad...reaching the end of life...standing on the verge of death...meeting the dead...knowing the end...its all sad but it was still..WOW!!!