MG OS: LOVE LIFE pt 6,7,8,9/65,66,74,78 jan 10 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
hiii friends

Very sorry guys for not updating early as I said….

Have to go to plan for a friend's b'day

Here is the part one do tell me if you like the beginning

And your response will make me continue this…..



LOVE LIFE





PART 1



She was waiting for him….time can move very fast that she knew but it will bring her these good time…. The time she spent with her love….. his one step towards her was something that she could never forget…. Maan the only name the only person…. Who is hers …. And she has dedicated her life to him..being only his…… she can't forget the time when she fought with him when they meet the first time…. Or the time he called her by her name…other than the names he used to address her….

Geet was sitting on the terrace it was the evening a orange hue was there in the sky she was sitting on the chair folding her legs wrapping her arms around her chest and drifted into the beautiful time she met her life…….

A girl … a bit matured a little messy …. Having a bubbly personality she can make you feel light ….a combination of different flavours in her life ….. her name describes her completely…a musical feel in her her voice is soft and melodious ….. but when you feel her getting angry the sudden transformation in her mood can make you go away from her…..

Geet handa a twenty three old young energetic and a enthusiatic girl……. Believes in hard work completed her post graduation….wanting to be a professor …..she mainly thinks what she will be well accommodated in this field as she herself behaves like a child….but utmost responsible……she can take the decisions that can make you feel that her words spokes more than her age…..

Geet has completed her education from daarjeeling now wanting to do a job that too specifically as a lecturer…… living with her uncle and aunt …. Belonging to the middle class family….. she was brought up by her mamaji and mamiji…..

Doesnot remember her parents only know her parents as her uncle and aunt…..

It was a bright morning …the sudden chill is there in the atmosphere due to late night heavy rain….all the natives are wrapped in warmers to protect themselves from the sudden chilly weather…..

Here a girl is sleeping covering herself from head to toe in a warm duvet…. The curtains are still intact at there place…. She is sleeping like haven't slept from ages…. A woman in her late forty's came near her and gently caressed her hair….the girl shifted her position to her lap and smiled with her closed eyes and said in a semi sleepy voice…..

Geet: good morning mami….

Geet's mami….mamta malhotra ….. a lady who adored geet as her own daughter never let her feel that she is not their own….after geet's parents demise the couple took care of the two year old geet….geet has the vague images of her parents in her subconscious……

Mamta: geet utho beta….late ho jayega…… you have a interview to attend …..train miss ho jayegi…..

Geet quickly wake up…..and after giving her sweet mami her morning kiss she rushed to the washroom to get ready…..

Geet: mami mera breakfast ready kar dijiye….. I am coming in ten minutes….

After some time geet finished her breakfast and was going …when her mama and mami were instructing her what to do and what not to….

Dheeraj malhotra a respectable man in darjeeling having roots from Punjab but settled in darjeeling with his wife and two year old niece geet after the demise of his sister and brother in law….. he is however against that geet should go and do a job far from them so he was not convinced at first for her sudden delhi trip ….. but after the constant pleadings and manofying from his wife and niece he had to agree …… but having his conditions that geet will take care of her and will call them every day….as he know how she forget when she gets what she wants…….

Both accompanied geet to the station and after making sure that geet is fine they bid her good bye….

Whereas on the otherside a young man wearing a dark purple shirt and black jeans walked into the office the office staff greeted him …..and he answered them with a casual smile…. He was a guy with easy going attitude…even after reaching the heights of success nothing can change him….. owning his own construction firm and working day and night to make his company to be counted amongst the renowned firms……

Maan as the name suggests he definitely gives justice to his name….. an orphan who didn't made himself dependent on anyone….. after his parents left him alone….. lived with his daadi but she too left him when he was fourteen…..

Does his schooling and graduation with the help of scholarships….. his cool mind and easy going attitude makes him shine like a crystal between the business sharks…. A man with such capability that he can make you stand from the ash coz he himself faced such a life…..

Having relatives who merely are behind his wealth and he knows and than too never lets them know…..

Maan walked in his cabin…. A simple and sober with well furnished …… he called his secretary for the the schedule of the day …she briefly elaborated him with the details……

later maan was out for a meeting ….a young girl who he knows only as a client is reday to throw her at Maan never say no ….. but if its not in his cup of tea he makes way to get rid of it…..

That's what he did with her….

As per he promised he went with her but his group of friends which includes both girls and boys were there to accompany him…..

His friend kartik and his gf kriti ….. only on seeing the client knew her intention……

Kriti whispered in maan's ear

Kriti: maan she is not your type ..ise kyun haan kaha…..

Other friends were looking at kriti whispering to maan ……

Whereas Abhinav and mansi whispered in each other's ear ……" lets have some fun….."

Abhinav dragged surbhi…..( the client) and mansi ..maan….seeing mansi maan knew that his client is badly gone…

They irritate her to such an extent that poor girl dropped the idea of seducing maan and went away…..his friends always help them….. mansi and abhinav are close to him as they too don't have anyone….and lives with him….. the couple is engaged…. Maan then left from there leaving his friends ….he knew that girls are behind him but he is waiting for someone who can light up his life with her presence….

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33




thank you so much

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
quite a nyc story line ..⭐️
beautifully narrated ..👏
AS ALWAYS ...😃

me looking forward to it yara ..😃
do update ASAP ..

here the 2 characters are soo much sweet ...😳
mujhe diabetic banane ka irada tou nahi hai na 😆...lolzz

just confirming is it going to be a sweetie cutie one or some spicy wala maaneet nok jhok ...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35



thank you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet

quite a nyc story line ..⭐️

beautifully narrated ..👏
AS ALWAYS ...😃

me looking forward to it yara ..😃
do update ASAP ..

here the 2 characters are soo much sweet ...😳
mujhe diabetic banane ka irada tou nahi hai na 😆...lolzz

just confirming is it going to be a sweetie cutie one or some spicy wala maaneet nok jhok ...😉




thank you so much...
yar quite sweet nok jhok hai isme... diabetic well irada toh nahi tha par kya karun agar tumne chaha toh ho jayega...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
one more added in ur list
so nice
precap..
lagtha hai
pyar jagda se shuru hojayega..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
nyc prt
Maaneet ki pehli meeting jhagdese hogi...lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
congrats dear coming again with another story
liked the concept
please continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update dear!!!!
Loved it verryy much... plzzz cont soon...w8ng

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