SwaRon OS: Procrastinated Beginnings - Page 7

Originally posted by: d_3rockskaren

nice one nick...

u know wat my sis's name is also nick and co incidently she is also a die hard swaron fan[not bigger than me😉]

but ya...dis os becomes more special to me seeing d name ''nikita''

love

karen

Hey there, glad to know dat ur sis and me share similar names. Thanks 4 the comment.

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

RES

I did not get any PM :(

Will read and comment soon 😳

Ok now that i read it, and really loved it. 😊

It was very different a concept and i see you went all the way justifying your title which i loved BTW. Liked the distinct SwaRon character your portrayed and setting and time of the story added real charm to this OS. The pain in Swayam and insecurity Sharon had shown well.

You may be a gloomy ending lover, but thanks for considering everyones opinion and writing the second part.

Sudha, feels good to hear from someone like u who's a fabulous writer herself.
Sorry for the PM, will definitely PM u from next time.

Originally posted by: shaani2209

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Firstly M so so so Sorry "Kaan Pakad ke Maafi" for being late...</font>

</div><div><font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">read both the parts in one go...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">I was totally surprised by the concept...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">lovely concept dear...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">The way you have portrayed Sharon and Swayam...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">They are so related to their characters but yet so different in this OS of your...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Loved the song you used to portray swayam's feelings...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">and lastly loved the end :)</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">thanks for the pm...</font>

Rosh di, finally u came. Glad u enjoyed reading it.

Nikita WoW what an update yaarSwaRon love is so pure and divine, and your update all the more enticing. Swayam has got the partience, that we have to admit. It is an update which touches every chord your heart, and leaves a mark. I loved it Nikita,and you one awesome writer. Plz do write more, this time make it an FF/SS plz. Thanks for a lovely sequel.🤗

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Nikita WoW what an update yaarSwaRon love is so pure and divine, and your update all the more enticing. Swayam has got the partience, that we have to admit. It is an update which touches every chord your heart, and leaves a mark. I loved it Nikita,and you one awesome writer. Plz do write more, this time make it an FF/SS plz. Thanks for a lovely sequel.🤗

Awwie, thanks a lot Suku and yeah, I've planned to post an another OS during dussehra.

Originally posted by: Rutu

Aha! A different storyline for the OS, oldy times haan, me liked it😎

</div><div>To begin with, I loved your title, goes well with the story that you have built up. Sharon shown here although demeans herself but insecurities do not leave her under any circumstances, even if the story is based in 70's😳To talk about Swayam, the character was pretty much the same as we all know, never ceasing to stop loving her. And you were thinking of ending in the first part itself, with some things uncleared? Glad you continued and gave a happy ending. Beautifully crafted must say

PS: Sorry for commenting this late, I read it finally. I have messed up with many unread PM's including yours, but now I have started sorting them😎

Thank you for PMing twice😆

Rutu, finally u came. Thanks a ton for this bada wala review. Glad u liked it.

Sorry for not commenting earlier
This os is really different from others 70s story ahh i really liked it
Sharon-an orphan n sweet girl but she have her own insecurities.This sharon is entirely different from the one we know but still i can connect to her n credit goes to u
swayam-our lover boy who love his sharon n didn't care about world
1st part was awesome but i liked sequel more as swayam n sharon become swaron forever.Their love is soo pure n divine n their magical kiss showed how much they loved each other...:)
It was simply amazing os,simple yet magical
loved it n thanks for pm