SwaRon OS: Procrastinated Beginnings - Page 8

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Sorry for not commenting earlier
This os is really different from others 70s story ahh i really liked it
Sharon-an orphan n sweet girl but she have her own insecurities.This sharon is entirely different from the one we know but still i can connect to her n credit goes to u
swayam-our lover boy who love his sharon n didn't care about world
1st part was awesome but i liked sequel more as swayam n sharon become swaron forever.Their love is soo pure n divine n their magical kiss showed how much they loved each other...:)
It was simply amazing os,simple yet magical
loved it n thanks for pm

Thanks, glad dat u liked the concept. And as for the PM, anytime buddy.

Originally posted by: magical_mania

<font color="#336600">Aah, finally could see the sequel of it...</font>

<font color="#336600">well wsn't expecting...but you made me wonder you've got the skills to turn on and off the emotions of your raeders.</font>

<font color="#336600">The way all goodie-goodie sharon helped her friend to prepare that deicious piece of dish but herself got stuck...</font>

<font color="#336600">tada...swayam the tough man, was gaping at her for hr sudden arrival made me chuckle...</font>

<font color="#336600">Awww...should i say this the way they confessed finally add stars to your write-up...</font>

<font color="#336600">You are ah-mazing nikki and you know it darls...</font>

<font color="#336600">Keep bringing things up...</font>

<font color="#336600">-Mania❤️</font>

P.S. Sorry i didn't see this part earlier so was late

Mannu, pata hai this OS makes me proud of the way it unfolded. You happen to be my lucky charm, I suppose.
Thanks for ur ever sweet encouragement sis. It really means a lot to me.

Really liked the os...it was an amazing n different concept...read both the parts back to back...sorry for commenting late...very well written...u have brilliant writing skills...n thnx for pm.

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

Really liked the os...it was an amazing n different concept...read both the parts back to back...sorry for commenting late...very well written...u have brilliant writing skills...n thnx for pm.

srry dear i m commenting late.i had read this OS a long tym back.but due to the things that we r gng on forum u must be knowing..so i did nt wish to comment.but nw i read it again.i liked d first part very much than d second one.srry i m saying dis.but d first took me to that old stories kind of..but neverthless d second part also matched upto it..

Originally posted by: chimpukli10

srry dear i m commenting late.i had read this OS a long tym back.but due to the things that we r gng on forum u must be knowing..so i did nt wish to comment.but nw i read it again.i liked d first part very much than d second one.srry i m saying dis.but d first took me to that old stories kind of..but neverthless d second part also matched upto it..

Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal

i am readin dis lyk now...😲😲😲 how pathetic can i get!

dis story was jus splendid...i loved it so much...

swayam in d army uniform must hav lukd hawt

their love story is so beautifuly described here...

gosh...m off to readin it again...sorry for a tiny comment but m really speechless

Originally posted by: nikita_arsha

Payal😳

You made me blush. Thanks...

i came bak again to post a comment but i still dunno wad to say😕 u can pick d best compliment u lyk