Nikita,
Thank you for linking me to your OS here. It is an honor for me that you were counting on my two cents. For if I am one helluva writer you're no less. đłđI'll begin with lauding you for coming up with such a splendidly distinctive concept. This plot is oddly engaging in its period setup and benign approach. The narrative incorporates the heavy business that army is into a very cozy and warm read, which we owe to simpleton Sharon's benign point of view. In the second chapter it is made into a passionate and pristine longing between Swayum and Sharon for each other.I like how somehow we can simply never pull off a Swayum whose not forgiving and mellow and a Sharon whose not outwardly vile with an inside of a softie in our fictions. đł Swayum and Sharon encounters, if I may say so in the best of our fictions here are always reminiscent to them in the show. Sharon rejects Swayum time and time again, anywhere you go in the SwaRon fandom. You've carried it out immensely well. No Sharon I have ever read about ever found herself deserving of her Swayum. It's quite characteristic to a delightful read for me here, thus making this OS here a pleasurable read!Wondrous technique and polished skill, I would say! Well done.Love fromKanks