SwaRon OS: Procrastinated Beginnings - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Savage

Nikita,


Thank you for linking me to your OS here. It is an honor for me that you were counting on my two cents. For if I am one helluva writer you're no less. 😳😆

I'll begin with lauding you for coming up with such a splendidly distinctive concept. This plot is oddly engaging in its period setup and benign approach. The narrative incorporates the heavy business that army is into a very cozy and warm read, which we owe to simpleton Sharon's benign point of view. In the second chapter it is made into a passionate and pristine longing between Swayum and Sharon for each other.

I like how somehow we can simply never pull off a Swayum whose not forgiving and mellow and a Sharon whose not outwardly vile with an inside of a softie in our fictions. 😳 Swayum and Sharon encounters, if I may say so in the best of our fictions here are always reminiscent to them in the show. Sharon rejects Swayum time and time again, anywhere you go in the SwaRon fandom. You've carried it out immensely well. No Sharon I have ever read about ever found herself deserving of her Swayum. It's quite characteristic to a delightful read for me here, thus making this OS here a pleasurable read!

Wondrous technique and polished skill, I would say! Well done.

Love from
Kanks






Kanks, let me breathe first. Ahh, what a pleasurable comment you have posted honey.
You plastered a big smile on my face. Feels good to hear from someone who happens to be the queen of SwaRon write-ups.
I just can't control my frenzy. I really thank you for each and every word of yours. Glad that I entertained you.
Sharon happens to be benign indeed and Swayum, the mellow perfect gentleman.
Thanks😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Okay, I have no clue how I missed this one, but I guess it's just been my loss.

Awesome OS. The entire thing was very well written and conceptualised. It was different from all the other stuff you find here and that in itself was something that added to why this OS seems so brilliant. I liked how you framed the entire thing as a 70s love story. The first part was sort of heart-braking, to see Sharon distancing herself from Swayam.. :(

But the next part had me happy. At least it ended on a happy note and I guess thats all that matters. :)

Thank you for the PM. :)

P.S I need to rush right now. Will read the newer OS later.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

Okay, I have no clue how I missed this one, but I guess it's just been my loss.

Awesome OS. The entire thing was very well written and conceptualised. It was different from all the other stuff you find here and that in itself was something that added to why this OS seems so brilliant. I liked how you framed the entire thing as a 70s love story. The first part was sort of heart-braking, to see Sharon distancing herself from Swayam.. :(

But the next part had me happy. At least it ended on a happy note and I guess thats all that matters. :)

Thank you for the PM. :)

P.S I need to rush right now. Will read the newer OS later.


Sorry Shrish, forgot messaging u
Thanks for your ever-sweet comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS loved both the chapters...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was such a beautifully written OS. It is such a shame that I am reading this now. The concept, the story and the characters-everything was just so very perfect!
Love,
XOXO
Amrita!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: idiot_box

That was such a beautifully written OS. It is such a shame that I am reading this now. The concept, the story and the characters-everything was just so very perfect!

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<div>Love,
XOXO
Amrita!!



Amrita, you are such a prolific writer. Reading a comment from you is a privilege for me dear and you don't have to be guilty about anything :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Nice os :-) please pm me when you write something new

Nikki <3

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