SwaRon OS: Procrastinated Beginnings - Page 5

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I'm so happy that you decided to write a sequel to this OS !! I loved the way Sharon got irritated when Swayam ignored her at first !! But Swayam is Swayam !! The way he declared that he will always love her was enough to break her down and make her admit her love for him !! I'm so happy that you ended it with them getting together !!! Loved the whole OS !!

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

Going back to the 70's, are we? 😆 Brilliantly plotted and masterfully written Nikita! Such a simple love story captured in such a timeless and beautiful manner. I really liked the way you modified their characters while keeping their intrinsic qualities perfectly intact. I guess some things you just cannot change. Sharon will always remain plagued by her bundle of insecurities, in perpetual belief that she can never be good enough to live upto Swayam's love. And Swayam will always be the extra-patient, extra-loving person that he is. I really liked the way you got the class distinction in between and how Swayam chose to blatantly disregard it. I loved the way you expressed Swayam's heartbreak and dejection. A simple yet an engrossing read.

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I read that note wherein you mentioned that you were going to continue it. Really?😲 I mean really? Were you previously planning on not continuing it? Then you have a weird way of ending things woman! But I'm glad you decided to write a sequel to it. Thanks for the PM.

Nidhi.

P.S. Nice title. Though you used that one time too many. 😆 I guess you're really fond of it.

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Originally posted by: dips098

<font color="#660099"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">hey Nikita...that was a fantastic piece of work...read both the chapters at one go ...& m speechless...i loved the way u showed swayam's pain and sharon's confusion n reluctance ... i loved both the characters ...could feel their pain through ur words...thanx for the pm..keep writing ...😊</font></font>