SwaRon OS: Procrastinated Beginnings - Page 3

Originally posted by: Luvsd3

hey its a nice os...
you have beautifully portreyed miserable condition of sharon...i would love to read its sequal so if u can plz post its nxt prt soon..
p.s-sending u buddy req. plz accept and send me pm nxt time...
regards
himani...

Hey Himani, thanks for ur comment. But, this OS was meant to have a sad ending, so can't continue it. Do check my other works :-)

Originally posted by: mrash

Nikita, you are amezing!!!
🤗

Sucha a different storyline 👏

Our Fevourite characters in really different way...

And very nicely penned down...

Please keep it up dear.

Awwie, thanks for the lovely comment.

Originally posted by: ABBY92

That was a beautiful OS and I love the way you set in the 70s with Swayam being a general and Sharon, the waitress !! As usual, Swayam falls for her inner beauty which is something we love about him but it's so sad to see Sharon think that she doesn't deserve him or his kindness !! Nevertheless, beautifully written !!

Abi, thanks for appreciating the OS. I'm glad u loved the theme of 70s.
Perhaps, this OS was meant to end on a gloomy note, so it ended likely. Thanks for the adulation dear.

Originally posted by: swaronilicious

Damn yaar such a unique concept

Keep writing more on swaron

Loved this os to the core

Thanks for commenting, glad u loved it.

Beautiful Os... Loved it ! 😊

beautiful OS!!it was different to read dis concept!!do you have plans of continueing dis??it wud be gr8 if u do so!!thankx for the PM!! :)

Originally posted by: nikita_arsha

Bhaiya, you are undoubtedly the bestest brother in the world. You covered almost each and every point of the OS.
You say that u r proud of me haan and I feel blessed to have a support system like you.
You imagined a short film on it, ahh, I'm deeply touched Bhaiya.

nikki you the sweetes sis the whole world... i dont know i am bestest brother or not but ya i will be always with you my dear... i tried to cover all possible points i observed in the update. but sorry if i forgot anything. and ya if you say you are blessed to have me as brother than i think god will be very kind on me so that a sweet girl from no where came to me and in no time became a the most adorable sis...and i really thought i was seeing some short films...about sad endings i can say that i can relate to it because i have seen only sad endings in my own life...so in reality sab kuch happy note pe khatam nahi hota...so cudos for making such a brave ending deapite knowing that people wont like it...