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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

nicely written!! do update soon!! very different concept:-)

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sshh.. ;)

@momo121

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

wow,

great update :D

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priya

@silvia1999

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

READ ALL PARTS...LOVED THIS FF.THANKS FOR PM

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adithyan

@adithyan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

nice update...
Arnav fell down from tree???

thanks for pm...waiting for next update

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janu

@jenji08

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Halo frnds , how are u, thanks 4 ur lovely comments

PART 3

Arnav went to devimaya temple in the hospital. he thanked
devimaya for giving his bua back as their child. he believed his bua is going to born on this earth soon, and he prayed that khushi should also become normal very soon.

he is very happy that he is going to become father and khushi is going to become mother.

suddenly he felt someone hand on his shoulder,so he turned to see who is owner of that hand, it was Anu.

Anu : bhai is it true, khushi is pregnant but how you are
going to accept this child bcos khushi is not in
sense and (cuts off arnav).

Arnav : Anu i already decided, khushi is going to give birth to
that baby and i am going to be baby's legal father. so
you please stop about it and moreover (cuts off anu)

Anu : (anger)why should i stop it bhai, you itself know you
are not father of khushi's baby, and moreover when
she becomes normal, she will be broken bcos of
this baby.

Arnav :(anger) Stop it Anu stop it, its our personal, i know
how to handle her and i will protect my khushi and
my baby.

Anu :(fake smile)what your baby, dont joke bhai. i also know
what happened to khushi after your marriage and
khushi was rap(cuts off by Arnav).

Arnav :(anger he shouted) G..E..T OUTTT damnit . i know you
are my sister but remember one thing, i am father for
khushi's baby . and i believe My bua is going to born
in this world so you please stop your nonsenses.

Anu : (shocked) what!!!!!!!! you said bua is going to birth, no
bhai you are wrong, that baby is not our bua. anyway
bhai you have taken wrong decision.

saying this anu left from there and Arnav closes his eyes and remembered what happened to khushi 3weeks before. he really felt guilty for that day.

then he went to see khushi who was sleeping peacefully, so he went near her ,bent down and kissed her forehead lovingly and said...

Arnav : i am sorry khushi . i really dont know how you are going
to react that you are going to be mother . i am really felt
guilty.but one thing is true your mom is in the form of
our baby, i promise you this time i will protect you and
our baby.

Next day, khushi discharged from hospital but still she is unconcious due to medicines So nani,Arnav,Anu took khushi to RM.

now khushi is in Arnav's bedroom,she wakes up in the afternoon and saw that she was lying in Arnav's room in RM. so she shouted.

Khushi : AAAhhh!!!!!!!!!

on hearing her Nani , Arnav came rushed to see what happened to her. Khushi was shocked to see them then she started crying so nani went near her console her and Arnav was standing near the door and crying silently on seeing her like this condition.

Nani : khushi meri bachi , What happened dear why are you
crying.

Khushi :(while sobs) where is my mumma, i want to go home nani
otherwise my dad will hit me and mumma. i want to go
home now(then she again started crying)

Nani : actually your mom and dad went to out of station to
attend one wedding so they only brought you here
and they told me to take care of you till they come.

Khushi : nani its really true ha. my dad told me to stay here in
RM but he wont like me talking to you or arnav and
moreover i have to go to my school tomorrow. i have
lot of homework to write.(childish tone)

Arnav : No khushi your school is holiday for somedays.

Khushi :(childish tone)really arnav wow its good news for me
i am going to stay in RM for somedays and my school
is also holiday moreover my dad allowed me to stay
here ,but why i cant remember anything.

Arnav and Nani know she is now behaving like 10yrs old girl so they try to make her believe them.

Arnav : Khushi my baby , you wont believe me haan.

Khushi : (childish tone)i believe you Arnav but i miss my mumma
lot, you itself know i always want my muuma nearby ,
but (cuts off by arnav)

Arnav : no buts , you are going to stay in this RM and that to
my room with me.

Khushi : (childish tone)what i am going to stay in your room,
but we are young children and i am 10yrs old and
not yet married to you.

Arnav : no baby we are going to stay in same house and same
room , as well as i am going to take care of you dear.

Khushi : Arnav i have one doubt , what happened to me i feel
giddy and nausea, then my head also got hurt.
(childish tone)

Arnav and nani was shocked to hear this . they didnt know what to say , then suddenly Anu came

Anu : its bcos you fell down while we are playing and so you
got hurt in your head then nausea and giddy are due to
medicines so no need to worry my khushi. we are here to
take care of you.

Khushi : (childish tone)okay Anu , then Arnav did you finished
your homework.

Arnav : Hmmm.. why khushi you need anything.

Khushi : (childish tone) Actually we can play for sometimes
pleaseee.

Arnav : not now khushi, you just need to rest, after that we can
lot and now you are going to take your lunch.

Khushi : (childish tone) oookkayyy...

then Anu and nani went to temple for some puja for khushi's health and Arnav was all alone in RM with Khushi.now khushi is again sleeping, and Arnav was remembering some incident.

Arnav's POV:

i know i failed to protect bua but now i have second chance so surely i will protect you and our baby from those evils. After our marriage everything has been changed

and that horror day i cant forget it, its changed your entire life , due to that day you are pregnant now .

And again another worst day in my life is my bua that is your mumma death day ( just before 4 days). that day is really very worst day.but anyway khushi i am always there for you till my last breath.

there is one biggest mistake which i did but no one knows it till now,and i dont know you are going to forgive me for that .

Precap:

Arnav fall from tree
Khushi's dad wil try to harm her

Hints:

What mistake Arnav made?did he made any biggest Sin?
Moreover Khushi will forgive him for it?

Anu said Arnav is not father for Khushi's baby, so what happened to khushi before 3 weeks?

eventhough Arnav is khushi's husband then who is real father for khushi's baby? frnds can you guess

two incident has been happened,on two different days. one is 3weeks before and another incident is 4days before.(twist)

there is biggest twist and secret about khushi's pregnant.

Khushi dad will try to harm her but will Arnav save her?

Edited by jenji08 - 12 years ago

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nina282

@nina282

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

wow! this is intense. please continue.

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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

wow lot of suspense yaar...so much suspense s not good plsss update nxt part soon...who s dad for kushi's child??i think it must be arnav...may be he s the one who raped her..tats wat he s mentioning as sin and thinking whthr she will forgive??...i guess so dont bash me...surely arnav will save frm her father...thanks for update n pm...

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

itna sara suspense plss update soon
and i hope arnav is father of khushi's pregnency

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

awesome dude... But felt pitty for both... I got emotional for khushi while asking for her mumma.. Plz revele the secrets soon... Im waiting
thanks for pm darling