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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
great update full of mystery
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Halo frnds i am updating part 4 for this ff and this will be short update
 but part 5 will be Mahaupdate.


                                                   PART 4

Arnav's POV:

i know i failed to protect bua but now i have second chance so surely i will protect you and our baby from those evils. After our marriage everything has been changed


and that horror day i cant forget it, its changed your entire life , due to that day you are pregnant now .


And again another  worst day in my life is my bua that is your mumma death day ( just before 4 days). that day is really very worst day.but anyway khushi i am always there for you till my last breath.


there is one biggest mistake which i did
but no one knows it till now,and i dont know how you are going to forgive me for that .


In evening:

Nani ,Arnav and Anu were in living room talking about Khushi's health condition.And khushi was again sleeping in Arnav's room.


While she is sleeping she saw one dream in which four boys kidnapping one girl and one of boy came forward and slap that girl .
then that girl fell down unconcious.

On seeing this dream Khushi shouted and Wake from the bed, she was sweeting lot and breathing heavily.She  again remember that dream but cant remember those faces in her dream.then she started crying


On hearing Khushi's voice Arnav, Anu, Nani came rushed to her, Arnav came near and hugged her protectively.then he asked what happened to her.


Khushi told him about her dream, On hearing this Nani,Anu and Arnav were shocked. they didnt know how to console her.


Suddenly Arnav had an idea so he carried her in his Arm and took her to the garden, Nani, Anu followed them. while Arnav was carrying her,khushi was looking into his eyes and she was again breathing heavy.


then he made her sit near Mango tree.Khushi lifted her head and saw tree full of mango.she loved mango were much.So on seeing that tree,she went to climb on that tree.


Arnav saw this and told khushi not to climb on tree.



Arnav     :  khushi what are you doing ?


Khushi   : (in childish tone) i am going to climb that mango tree.


Arnav     :  Are you mad damnit, this tree is big so you will fell
                    down from it(cuts off by Khushi)



Khushi   : (in childish tone)
but i want that  mango please Arnav
                    atleast one mango pleaseee.

Arnav     :  okay you just wait for 15mins, i will ask HP to buy
                     some mangos for you.


Khushi   : (in childish tone)
no no no i dont want to buy it.I want
                    this mango from this tree right now.



Arnav     : but Khu(cutsoff by khushi)


Khushi   : (in childish tone but with strict) you climb that tree right                           now Arnav. otherwise i will climb.


Arnav     : khu(again cut off by khushi)

Khushi   : (with Adamant tone) i want that mango now, otherwise
                    (cuts off by Arnav).

Arnav     : (with anger) Okay i will get it for you now,


then Arnav went to climb mango suddenly khushi went near him and hugged him. then she said...


Khushi   : (in childish tone)i want more mango's arnav, pleaseee.

Arnav     : okay baby


then Arnav climbed mango tree and khushi is standing down and  ordering him to go from one branch to other  branch.

Nani and Anu were laughing on watching this.


while Arnav was in one of branch which has more mango's and that branch was above swimming pool present in garden


suddenly due to his weight ,that branch started to break. and Arnav fell down in swimming pool along with that branch and mango's in that branch also fell down in swimming pool.


On seeing this Anu,Nani were shocked and Khushi who was standing near tree panicked and went into swimming pool .


Arnav was very happy that Khushi is coming to save him. and he said


Arnav   :  its okay khushi,you stay there i will be coming on
                  myself from pool dear.

Khushi : (in childish tone) no Arnav you can come out of
pool
                  easily but MY MANGO'S CANT COME ON ITS OWN,
                   so i have to help it.


Anu , Nani: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!😲


Arnav   :  WHAT THE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲😲😲



then everyone started to laugh including khushi. on seeing her laugh Arnav felt some thing in his heart and he again felt guilty.


And all this was watching by someone in the  RM with an evil smile.


Precap:


Khushi's dad hurt her.
New entry.
Arnav turns into ASR



halo frnds do you like this part . i know this part will be bored. but in next part i will give you triller update.


IN THIS PART  I MENTIONED ABOUT  KHUSHI'S DREAM ? CAN ANYONE GUESS WHAT IT WAS?

MOREOVER 4 BOYS KIDNAPPED ONE GIRL AND ONE OF BOY SLAPPED HER?


NEXT PART THERE IS NEW ENTRY?

THAT NEW ENTRY WAS NEGATIVE ROLE AN
D HE WAS THE BOY WHO SLAPPED THE GIRL. GUESS FRNDS?

now comment me frnds








Edited by jenji08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Emotional part !!😭
loved ur intense in writing !!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
gosh this is so thrilling and complicated...feel really bad for arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
shyam maybe ... the eternal villain in ArShi's life😉

keep updating soon

eager to know more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
It was good! I like Khushi, she's innocent and cute and Arnav is taking care of her 😳😃
but I'm sure that something bad will come to her, due to the new negative ebtry 😡 but I hope that Arnav will be here to protect her 😉
thank you for the PM, dear! kisses
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: natzzz

shyam maybe ... the eternal villain in ArShi's life😉


keep updating soon

eager to know more



wow genius gr8
but shyam is khushi's cousin bro

and new entry is not shyam

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
emotional yaar..but it was nice...thank u so much for the update...thanks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awesome update
i want to know wat was arnav's mistake

who raped khushi?
who slapped tat girl?
who is father of baby?
wen will khushi gain conciousness?
wat will be her reaction on knowing about her pregnancy?


soo many questions u can only answer them soo plss update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Emotional Update. There are too many questions with very few answers. Waiting for next parts to know the answers.

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