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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one dear...read all parts in one go awesome writing...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rafaheli

Awwieee Mushfika that mention was so super sweet of u !!! TIGHTTT HUGwa ! 🤗


Well first of all I rubbed my eyes for a few seconds..Socha...huh, Mushfika ka update?? Woh bhi 2 dino ke andar ?! You must be kidding! Maybe she sent that same previous part wala PM once again!
Maybe what ?..I was quite sure of that..LOL😆

This was fairly long update! Shruti, dont u dare to mess with our ASR n her love! But I kinda like these jealously and teesri aurat wala tracks ! 😉 Loved loved this part ! Good to sense a great storyline ahead !

This early updates is kinda scary from u...u know na? SILENCEwa before another long phase of no-updates STORMwa ?! JUST prove me wrong dear..I would loveee that ! 😆

And you have already made up for that !
Jahaan tak treat ki baat hai..how about Hotwa's flying kiss..hmm ?! 😉 😛






AAA omggg!!!! that's the best treat ever rafaheli i'm jumping outta joy lol love you girl!

here's the gift for you lol
and ROFLLL! u know na? SILENCEwa before another long phase of no-updates STORMwa ?!
no doubt that u're impossible🤣

lol and aww1 i';m really glad you're liking this track... hope you like today's update as well

and LMAO! loved how i gave you shocks that i ACTUALLY UPDATED


anyhow, thnx again! love love love your comment!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: choochootrain

Danggg...tis shruti really...cant she go somewhere else???...n.now.trying to ruin their honeymoon...may she nver succeed!!!...
So its asr's hotel???...wahhh...n he hang tat romantic picture!!!...kushi is sooo lucky...such pleasant surprise frm hubby...hope tey have a great time in e alps...




lol i knwo rght! she IS LUCKY 😉😉

and thank you

lol ab shruti ko ghusa diya hai, go jhel na to pade ga hi na 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Really nice start and oh dear shruti not going to like her at all hope she doesn't cause to much disturbance to their honeymoon.. Thanks for the pm can't wait for the next oart :)



thnx a lot sweta! and lol jhel lo is ladki ko kuch din aur 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr

Hey, thanks for the early update.

But come on, at least let them have their honeymoon in peace! I don't like Shruti and I hope Arnav does NOT treat Kushi the way we saw the reel Arnav do in show! I don't think I could bear that! If he is going to ignore her and treat her like she's an idiot just because say, she cannot play basketball, just because his girlfriend does, I'll puke!!!! Especially on their honeymoon! I'll not only puke, but I'll cry, too! Please, please, please don't let him be like he was in the show...! And please don't let him ignore her just because Shruti is there. Please, please, please.
Loved the surprise he had for her. So the hotel belongs to him. Any other secrets he is keeping from her? I think he should tell her everything! After all, they are husband and wife, nah? He's been married to her all this time and she does not know this??? Hmmm...!
What else does she not know? I hope you are not going to make Kushi cry on her honeymoon??????
Thanks for the PM. Waiting to see what happens next! Hopefully, Shruti will be gone and out of their lives!!!


woahhh!!!! meri update aur aap ka ques-asking session shuru ??? 😳🤣


o my gosh! CHILLAX DUDE! everything'll be fine and

the only answers for you questions is--------->keep reading, u'll find it out... cuz if i tell u before i'll ruin it for you ... sorry ! can't tell

ok?

and thnx a lot!

hope you like the part i'm gonna update now
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rafaheli

Awwieee Mushfika that mention was so super sweet of u !!! TIGHTTT HUGwa ! 🤗


Well first of all I rubbed my eyes for a few seconds..Socha...huh, Mushfika ka update?? Woh bhi 2 dino ke andar ?! You must be kidding! Maybe she sent that same previous part wala PM once again!
Maybe what ?..I was quite sure of that..LOL😆

This was fairly long update! Shruti, dont u dare to mess with our ASR n her love! But I kinda like these jealously and teesri aurat wala tracks ! 😉 Loved loved this part ! Good to sense a great storyline ahead !

This early updates is kinda scary from u...u know na? SILENCEwa before another long phase of no-updates STORMwa ?! JUST prove me wrong dear..I would loveee that ! 😆

And you have already made up for that !
Jahaan tak treat ki baat hai..how about Hotwa's flying kiss..hmm ?! 😉 😛






AAA omggg!!!! that's the best treat ever rafaheli i'm jumping outta joy lol love you girl!

here's the gift for you lol
and ROFLLL! u know na? SILENCEwa before another long phase of no-updates STORMwa ?!
no doubt that u're impossible🤣

lol and aww1 i';m really glad you're liking this track... hope you like today's update as well

and LMAO! loved how i gave you shocks that i ACTUALLY UPDATED


anyhow, thnx again! love love love your comment!
Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hello folks! first of all i'm feeling so great to make you guys SHOCKED at my PM... ALL OF YOU GUYS who commented were like: mushfika's updated? i'm shocked to see ur update, i can't believe you updated within 2 days, it must be a miracle. " 🤣 lol u guys!

ok now on an important note: this is a cute FF. i wont include too much of mature content. sorry to disappoint you guys but there are some reasons behind it. but don't worry, i will include SOME but it will be limited 😳 thnx for understanding

some of you had some questions about shruti which i can't answer lol... cuz it's just ruin everything ... u know, mushfika doesn't give spoilers 😉

and i'm here with a longgg update again😎... hope you like this one too😳😳

here you go!

want PMs? buddy me pls 😳


PART: 29


Khushi wore a white anarkali, a silver heel, minimal make-up and kept her hair open. She put on a small silver earing and her mangalsutra. She also had her shawl as it was a bit cold although they were inside the hotel and the heater was on. She looked like an angel

Arnav and khushi went to The restaurant in the second floor. They sat in a corner table behind a pillar.

As they sat in their respective chairs, they went through the menu.

Arnav: excuse me!

Everyone including the waiters knew ARnav Singh Raizada as the owner of the hotel. There was a huge photo of him hung on the wall downstairs.

Waiter: yes sir? What would you like to order Mr. Raizada?

Arnav and khushi ordered their food. As khushi waited for their food Arnav kept staring ar khushi.

Khushi: what?

Arnav: you look beautiful khushi!

And BAM! She started getting red again.

Arnav: you know-

Shruti: hey Arnav!

Arnav looked up to see shruti standing with a big smile in her face. She wore a hot-pink cocktail dress with high hills.

Shruti: ooppss! Am I disturbing you guys? Hey khushi!

Arnav: eerrr'. Well y-

Khushi: No, no. it's okay Shruti ji! Come join us!

That made Arnav fume. What is khushi thinking? What was the need to ask shruti join?! Can't we EVER HAVE SOME PRIVACY?! He thought.

Shruti smiled and khushi smiled back. But the next step of shruti made khushi feel that it was actually a wrong decision.

Shruti took the chair RIGHT between Arnav and khushi and sat close to Arnav.

Shruti: sooo? What's up Arnav? We met again!

Arnav looked at khushi who's face went pale and Arnav smirked at that. Well khushi kumara gupt singh raizada, it's my turn now.

Arnav: yap. How long have you been in this hotel?

Shruti: oh I have been here for two weeks. Actually looking for a job and then search an apartment

They talked for a long time and khushi just sat there getting bored. She saw how arnav and shruti laughed together, how they were so frank with each other, how they recalled their memory.

Meanwhile, Arnav took quick glances of her to see her state.

As the food served, Arnav and shruti helped themselves and khushi was just lost in her wave of thoughts.

Arnav: khushi? What's wrong?

Khushi: nothing Arnav. Let's eat

They finished eating and Arnav bid bye to shruti which she id by hugging him as usual making khushi get into this thought in her head more and more.

As they left fo their room, arnav held her wrist and dragged a confused khushi to the elevator and to their room.

Locking the door , Arnav turned around with a dangerous expression.

Arnav: so?

Khushi: so? So what?

Not meeting his eyes, she was about to walk past when Arnav held her wirst and pulled her so that she was face to face to him

Arnav: what was the need to ask shruti join us?

Khushi looking at him: well, she came to the same restaurant and saw us. And she herself wanted to join us. How cou;d we refuse?

Arnav: But we are on our HONEYMOON khushi!.

Khushi: but arnav she's your best friend.

Arnav: We need some privacy!

khushi: we can't be rude to people just because we need privacy.

Arnav: I don't care!

Khushi: we should arnav.

Arnav: NO!

Khushi: Arnav she's your best friend!

Arnav: so what?

Khushi: she's important to you too!

Arnav: not more than you.

That was it. That one last statement made khushi feel as if she's the only one who mattered to Arnav. She was the one and only precious things arnav has in his life. That one statement made khushi forget everything about shruti. She just ran and gave him a tight hug wrapping her hand around his neck making Arnav dumbfounded.

Khushi: I love you Arnav

Arnav: khushi?

Khushi: I love you!

Arnav hugged her by her waist.

They stood in each other's arm for a long time and finally pulled back.

Arnav looked into her eyes and cupped her face.

Arnav: I love you too.

Khushi smiled and went to the wardrobe for changing.

Arnav: khushi, you remember what is aid in the evening right?

Khushi thought for some seconds and then

Khushi: Arnavji, I'm not gonna wear the night dress, please.

Arnav: either you wear it or I will make you wear my dear!

Khushi: but Arnavji

Arnav: gave you only 2 choices sweetheart

He said with his ASR smirk making khushi glare at him.

After a few minutes khushi came out of it wearing the red nightdress which arnav bought for her. Thanks to Arnav that it wasn't that exposed and khushi was comfortable in it.

Arnav just stared at his little wif's innocent expression, that adorable face and he must admit. She was looking hot in his favourite colour. As she came out of the wardrobe, with her hair open, Arnav pulled her to the bed and went on top of her.

Arnav: wow khushi, I must admit you look hot

Khushi: shut up arnav

Arnav chuckled and She went to her blushing session again.

Arnav started kissing her forhead, her nose, then the right cheek, left cheek, her chin. He moved down to her neck and kissed it bit it and licked it making her close her eyes.

Khushi: ar'. Arnavji.

Arnav: yes khushi?

He said and continued with his actions.

Khushi: uh' I think your phone is ringing.

Arnav: no khushi it's not.

He kissed her arms.

After a few seconds-

Khushi: umm'' you know arnavji, I think amanji wanted to talk to you.

Arnav: khushi, I just talked to him before going to bed.

He moved to her half bare back and started caressing and kissing it.

Few seconds later-

Khushi: arnavji, I think somebody is knocking at the door.

Arnav: nobody is knocking at the door. now khushi if you don't stop making things up you'll regret after what I do to you.

That made khushi stop immediately and she gulped.

Arnav continued with his actions for some more times and then they snuggled into each other's arm pulling the duvet over them.


so?? how was it? 😳 liked it???? lloved it???


pleaseee let me know through your lovely comments and don\t forget to hit the like button😉😉

thank you!


Thread 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3390264/link-to-thread-4-thread-3-and-he-returned

Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay me first 🥳
Loved d update
Pls update soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Actually, I hated this update.
Sorry!
He made her feel like shit the whole evening by being extra nice to Shruti and ignoring his NEW wife and then he had sex with her, in the name of love??!! That was really disgusting! I would not call hurting someone you profess to live without, love!! I am sorry but this update did nothing but make me mad at Arnav for treating Kushi like dirt, like a nobody. He did not take her feelings into consideration at all. So she invited his college mate for dinner, he should have been gracious and cordial to her. Not behave like she was a long lost love to the point of ignoring his wife!!! Seems like he says he loves his wife but shows nothing like that. Except to bed her! And one doesn't need love to have sex! The worse thing was he kind of knew how she was feeling, but showed no remorse for treating his WIFE like that - like she was a nobody!!!!!!
Thanks for the update. Waiting to see what happens next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update 😊 and liked it a lot since u update
a lot more then u used to and cant wait or the next one 😛

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