OS... night after the past.. last part on page 11

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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Man that is sad but very poetic.

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mpk2011

@mpk2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Lovely !!!👏👏👏👏
Hail the sadists !😊

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: mpk2011
Lovely !!!👏👏👏👏
Hail the sadists !😊

Sadist..😛

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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Beautiful writing but how can Shyam creepwa win😡

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vaatuhaara

@vaatuhaara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: riti4u
Jachu..take our request... we want cruel end to shyam😆 and a happy ending for arhi😳

honeys... 😳 if i start writing about Punishing Shyaam... then it can be another forum itself... i would love to punish him, or even buy a private HELL for him... Such a man😡 lusting outside marriage, i somehow managed to see, but killing one's own baby, with out the slightest regret or emotion...😡

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

OMG...this is a total heartbreak for me!! 💔 😭 I'm still crying!! 😭 I thought they were going to finally be together!! I was so surprise with the direction of the story!! 😲 How could evil win?!! This is too hard to handle!!

In a way they are together but just in a different state!! Thanks for sharing your beautiful but sad story with us!! 👏