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vaatuhaara

@vaatuhaara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: mouramen
too emotional Too painful...
Beautifully penned down
Thanks Riti for guiding me to this super os.

thanks dear... riti beta is ready with monkey army to make me run, until i write a happy one

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amita

@star_fan1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

omg its too emotinal too much painful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

wow beautiful dear...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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adithyan

@adithyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

it was painful...beautifully written...
aapne unhe maar kyu diya?

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vaatuhaara

@vaatuhaara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: adithyan
it was painful...beautifully written...
aapne unhe maar kyu diya?

thanks...

i tried to write a happy ending... bt, then, it wasnt working. Honestly, i dont know, how people in love can survive a situation like in the show... so, just wrote ahead...😊

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*ArShi*

@hetalmkn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

omg... my heart stopped beating and the only thing i could think of was ASR's heer ranjha comment...

wow.. yaar... amazingly written...

when i read they met at the cliff i was like hmm okie normal thing.. how can hero n heroin die just like that...

but suddenly shyam wow... u turned the whole thing upside down...

then again when i read the part she was giggling... i thought its a dream.. bt then nop.. u surprised me again...

lovely really...

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boisecrazy

@boisecrazy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

love 3 1/2 episode...was shocked and jolted at the last half...

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

very heart breaking and emotion...beautiful

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fly_dog

@fly_dog

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

My heart 💔

cried so much...awww...they died Nooo...i was happy u were going to end it in happy note but never mind its so sad

u write so well..can u please Kill Shyam too this guy is so sick

Emotional one Jachu..great work keep it up

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: tenxin
My heart 💔
cried so much...awww...they died Nooo...i was happy u were going to end it in happy note but never mind its so sad

u write so well..can u please Kill Shyam too this guy is so sick

Emotional one Jachu..great work keep it up

Jachu..take our request... we want cruel end to shyam😆 and a happy ending for arhi😳