ARHI FF: Master Class: Thread 3

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asdfjkl

@asdfjkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Arnav opening up to Khushi about his past/parents was really amazing, and a great way to show how forward their relationship has moved. All of the actions in the chapter just showed how their relationship forwarded and how they have grown to understand each other. It was beautiful to read!

You've left us with a cliffhanger though; so now i must wait to figure out her answer. great update still

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

wow this is getting really interesting now! lol

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urm21

@urm21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

nice to see ASR opening up to the pain. when the next update

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Aiee!

I hope she says no! it's too early. I read your note on exploring intimacy, but I feel it's too early. Although, he broke down in front of her, I don't feel they are on the same wavelength, and if they do have sex, which is not love yet, at least, not that they have confessed to each other, although they feel they couldn't live with each other, and their feelings are strong, it might bring about problems later on. (Hai! I know it's your story!! 😆)

But I just loved how you made him break down in front of her, all that trust! Wow!

And, I would have no qualms in this becoming a love story ( in fact, I would love it to become a love story!)

Still awaiting anxiously, some hot moments (well, yes, as long as they don't go through with it!) and for him to lose control! Hehe!

Can't wait for the next update. Will she? Or won't she? I hope she won't!!

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abayance

@abayance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

nice. waiting for next update :D

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Sorry for late reply, just read the last three updates.
Wow, am happy i read the three together or the suspense might have gotten much.
Oh the... Bond between arnav and khushi is just so envious, and the honesty and faith they are coming up and showing each other, i swear its making me almost jealous and definitely wishfull. Awesome job. What i love is how you show them opposite, yet in the relationship they are 'equal'(cant seem to find a better word atm) in different ways, and wanting to give that equality to the other. I hope that made sense.
Waiting eagerly for next part.

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

A Mind blowing update.

Loved it to the core.

Simply amazing.

I loved how honestly Arnav said he cannot believe into relationships.

I loved Khushi did not let insecurity come in between them in this crucial moment.

I loved how calmly and compassionately she was with Arnav and help him come to a catharsis.

I loved how she called her parents with the courage and confidence.

Honestly and Truth - are the essence of all.

Loved the updated v much.

Thank you.

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

So so proud of how Khushi handled her parents with that request. Shows how mature the characters in your story are! And, yes you are absolutely right about cliffhangers. I am here ready to devour the next update you will be throwing our way :) It was a beautiful update that highlighted the true essence of their relationship: how they are there for each other!