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Varisha sheikh

@vari3241

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#741

U shud be a professional author coz ur really gud 😊 update soon 😊

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#742

Such a beautiful and emotional update, i honestly dont know which word too use to describe your writing style because you are just superb. Feels so sorry for khushi, she is so scared to move towards the light, also really loved this update as it was khushi's point of view. Thanks for the PM and update xxx

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#743

I loved the update..Khushi's POV so beautifully written! :)
The footfalls being Arnav...and leaving her in pain all the time :''( and on the other hand, trying to calm her down :)

The contrast is shown beautifully..between how Khushi perceives Arnav now and then..!!

Lovely! 😊

Waiting for the next update! :)

Edited by SaRunLicious - 13 years ago

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#744

This update somewhat clarifies Khushi's point of view.

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lovelyangel

@lovelyangel

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

I am speechless...you wrote brilliantly.

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#746

thanks for khushis pov... it was much needed :))) And the note too... it cleared up a lot of things!

the dark liquid that she spoke about was her getting the operation done??? and the soothing touches are her doctors??? is the dark fire death??? sorry if ive misunderstood :'(

loved the way she describes arnav by just the sound that his feet make... since he never spoke to her or gave her any other sound (be it laughter, satisfaction or anything else) to associate his presence with... shows how much she had detached her presence of mind from herself to protect her conscience from all the torture :(((

she does acknowledge and realise the baby within her and wants to fight so that he/she can survive... i think its time she consciously worked with arnav to come out of this despair and face him? no matter what he does now, she will never be normal unless she wants to be...

The footfalls try to tear down that sieved curtain so that I can go over the other side. But the footfalls fail again and again…..

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Mrs.Beckham Sobti

@.shinchan.

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#747

awww

beautiful...i can also sense some light now...KKG will now respond to ASR👏

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GoldenEyes

@GoldenEyes

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#748

great update! so emotional written...you are really a great writer 👍🏼

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#749

ahh, that makes for sense.. i thuoght arnav was going to lavanya and i was like WAHT!! okay, that was the past and now is him telling her.. still doesn't redeem him but okay..lol

my favorite part would have to be this : The footfalls try to tear down that sieved curtain so that I can go over the other side. But the footfalls fail again and again…..

that was beautifully written! continue soon and thanks for the pm!