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Posted: 12 years ago

Res. Dammit.. I'm soo slow.. :( I woke up late..
Watch this space.. I will res fiirst one day 😆

Zehra, that was a emotional and beautifully written update.. poor khushi is still frightened that she will remain in darkness.. I have no clue how arnav will pull her out into the light and let her know that she means a lot to him..

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Posted: 12 years ago

After reading and rereading it with ur help...

It was a very nice update... U hv Connected both the parts very well... Khushi's state is all numb, she doesn't feel anything, everything is dark around her, her life is all dark... So nothing else cud hv been a better way to depict all of it...
I like the use of darkness and light in explaining her pov...
Now that she sees some light, hope arnav takes her out of the darkness soon, assures her that the light and happiness r here to stay... Dunno how, but I know u will make him succeed in a beautiful manner...

Thanks again for giving her pov and that too so beautifully... :)

I love ur style of writing...

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Posted: 12 years ago

:( :(
what do i say?
Okay so those voices n hug are meant to b amans' n doctors' ,right?
Footfalls failing again n again? Means she obviously isnt accepting arnavs' positive attempts..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awee !! Poor kushi I feel for her ! Agrhh that arnav 😡

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Posted: 12 years ago

khushi's pov is so emotional..hope she recover soon.when khushi will talk to asr??

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Posted: 12 years ago

waiting !! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

wen u gonna update????😡

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farha

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Posted: 12 years ago

yes we will wait continue soon.

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Plzz update :(

Cnt wait anymore..

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Hira

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ru going to update today???

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