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Posted: 12 years ago
its ok dear...
We r waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m waiting for the update😭
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WAITING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!









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Posted: 12 years ago

those flashbacks brought tears to my eyes.how terribly her dreams have been shattered.😭.excellent update.i have no complaints with the way u have described khushi's pov.update soon dear.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Zehra kab tak bachon ko tadpaogi?
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god...
loved it...
her rajkumar...
reveal something dr...
its too suspense...
love to read more...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago


Un'res

I was really really terrified of how Khushi's reaction is going to be... I thought we'd have to relive the pain again😭

Thank god you wrote it metaphorically and we didn't have to see how khushi felt

Why do I feel there is more to Aman then we had seen... Aman is going to play a big role in the upcoming story...am I right?? or am I talking plain stupid??

So khushi does understand that she is pregnant ... I thought she was too numb to understand that... she wants to live for her kid... and no where in the update did she talk harshly about Arnav😕!!! What is that supposed to mean

I've a confusion though... what did you mean by black liquid???

Great update hun

Loved it

hugs

btw I love res'ing first😃
Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update !!

The way you built up I thought I'll end up not understanding anything...But you're a great writer... You have explained Kushi's POV so well !

So the footfalls fail again and again means Arnav is failing again and again in trying to comfort her...? But looks like she's feeling good about him nowadays...! Thats a good sign ...
And she wants to live for the life inside her...!!
I have the same doubt..What is the black waterbody..? The black liquid? Is it because its in the dark that it looks black to her ? Or blood can be black when it dries out...Oh wait..I don't know... I'm stupid !
And what's Black fire? Alien presence? Who's this alien ? Who's the motherly figure? Her doctor? Maid? Arrgh I have so many questions...

You have to update soon !!!
Pretty please...




Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful chapter Zehra. Perfect!
I feel like crying.
I was waiting to read khushi's POV and finally we got to read it. Kudos to you for writing this!
I understood everything, I just want a confirmation. That motherly figure who hugged khushi was the doctor right? The one who didn't abort khushi's baby? Am I right?
Khushi needs time, her scars are too deep. I hope she'll recover soon!
Continue soon! 🤗
Edited by ...Doctor... - 12 years ago

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