Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Last night i ws remebered u, and see tod u updated..

Thx Dear.

Such a lovely & emotional part. 😭

Love d wy u potrayed all characters & thr bonds.

Plz update soon , and Plz Ariya ko jaldi se milva do..😊

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

amazing update
riya found out about arjun going missing
hope arjun is safe
cont soon

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Poor Riya And Arjun Both Dying To See One Another<3
Glad Riya Knows The Truth So She Can Meet Arjun Asap
Poor ETF Team Members Their Helplessness Was Too Sad
Brilliantly Portrayed The Emotions Especially Riya's Fear Of
Loosing Arjun And The Mangalsutra Part Too Touchy
Fabulous Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thanksz x

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

it was so touching
so emotional
hope they ll meet soon
waiting 4 next part

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Next Chapter coming up tonight! 😉😛

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Waiting eagerly

i dun cum onlyn raat ko dese days ...but will cum to catch d update

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

hii dear ...rding alll da part of ds ff...u send me pm alwas bt i hvn chk my inbox ...whn i chk i found ds linkss n rd it...

1st of all love da cncpt vryyy much riya s pregyyy of arjuns baby its a drmyyy concpt...lv it ...lv it ...lv it❤️❤️

riya anger ...arjuns care...u potrt sooo beuutttiiiffulllyy...👏👍🏼

dn da most lvliest part fo my choice is da gr88 rmnctc scns wooo😳😉...❤️❤️

its da mostt most awsm part of it😊

den dey gt separtd due to da missionim hrfied...wht happn to my hero😭

poor riya ...arjun put hmslf in dngr😡

lvd da carng rathod shree chotu...dey so touchyy on riya 😊

i realyyy u md riya cpabl to find hr soulmt soonn...

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Amazing as usual dear...Brilliantly written!
very emotional part...had tears when i read the mangalsutra part and her fear for losing her husband!
i could see the difficulty the remaining team had in hiding it from Riya...could feel their helplessness and misery! Lives of cops and army people and their families are real tough! a fear of death or something untoward happening lingers around their lives...you have portrayed it brilliantly!

Now Riya knows that Arjun is missing...i hope she is brave and faces it! and also pls bring Arjun back soon!

cont soon!

Thanks Vidya.. And well said! 👍🏼 Though their fear may not be as dramatised as it is portrayed on the screen, their lives indeed are very difficult. Living in constant fear of losing someone, must be really painful!

Yes, well, like our super-cop says 'Aurat ki kabiliyat par kabhi shaq nahi karna chahiye..' 😉 And esp when the woman in concern is a certain Mrs. Rawte! 😉😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: lola123
Woww loved it...very emotional one...
Aww.. poor Arjun...his struggle just for his wife...
Really loved it...plz update soon...poori kardena meri adhoori si dua😉😆

Lol.. Oye hoye.. Of course karenge, darling.. 😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: sunshine94
u r writing after so long n cliffhanger yet again😈,.,.,.tu nahi sudregi😡

but but but,,,,.update as usual in chotu's words dhasu,.,.,.,.,.,.,.👏

thanks for writing👍🏼

Le! If you thought that was a cliffhanger, toh phir toh iss Chapter ke baad pakka joote padenge.. Thanks dear.. 😃