Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Hey ...

You know what ??? You are a mistress when it comes to cliff hangers :(

But the update was completely worth waiting ... :)

I actually had tears in my eyes when I read the way Arjun was struggling to meet riya ... :'(

N Riya's concern was emoted really beautifully :)

Poor Riya ... Her worst nightmares are actually turning true :(

Ok now plz dont let us wait for tooo long :)

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JennyPenny

@JennyPenny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Brilliant. Love the way it was written. So gripping.. Fab Fab. Please continue ASAP.

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

That was awesome... what will happen now?curious to know..update next part soon

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Kareena1994

@Kareena1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Superb
Was waiting for so long

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Awesome!!
Amazing update as usual!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!
Superb writing! Loved it!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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athira

@shruti-love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

awesome update

waiting for next part

cont soon

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Awesum update di..
loved it..
so emotional..i m crying!!
turmoil of etf members superbally described..
feeling bad fr ria...
omg arjun shot n in pain...
army people n police officers have to fulfill their duties in cost of their life...salute to them..
grt update di hats off to u too di...
merry christmas di..!!!

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago