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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

such a short comment.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
next update title-a road to bloodbath.there are two generations of the story.
first generation-anushka's story
second generation-its a story someone related to anushka,i mean real anushka.😆
oh i love giving mysteries.😈

this story is gonna be long...so please be patient,i will try to keep it interesting so that you guys won't leave it in middle.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
ufff like button not working 😡 so u finally Introduced our Hero Hrithvik Arnab's cruel death n Anu's strange dream n tis new X-men who killed Arnab n some Romantic moments btwn Surya n Hrtivik u put everything in place dear so our HERO is emotional abt his past n feels incomplete though he loves Surya more than himself i like tis plot Moni wil b waiting for nxt update(sumwer u told tat umay not give updates for months too pls dont do it yaar cant wait until all mystris abt our Hero unfolds)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
@ hema okay i won't give monthly updates.happy now??😃i initially planned it a monthly ff but i think i myself won't be able to handle mystery that much.😆
the mystery don't surround any particular person,everyone has their own mysteries,yeah arnab's death was so cruel.😡.i hate the person who killed him.😆
i hope you guys are liking my ff music as well.don't you?😊
by the way i should warn you guys that my plot is very complicated.true reasons,true intentions and actual thing is not gonna be revealed till the very last arc of first generation like the murderer of arnab will be revealed way late.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: lucykaede



i never heard of that book😕.no this story is my own imagination.😳


Thats cool:) its a gr8 series yeah not many have heard abt it. Kitty jones is lead heroine in that book
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: TimenTIMEagain


Thats cool:) its a gr8 series yeah not many have heard abt it. Kitty jones is lead heroine in that book


hmmm...okay i will give it a try whenever i get time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
chapter-6-a road to bloodbath(note-i am again repeating this,please don't read in between,read all updates otherwise you won't be able to understand my story at all.please don't blame me then that i write confusing stories.😆if you read it in between you will only abandon this story.it will make me close this ff)
anu was in her bus sitting with another girl.trishna was in front seat.
girl-any ye kya hain?
anu-ye ek music box hain.
girl-accha bahut purana lagta hain.
anu-haan ye muzhe ek ped ke neeche gada hua mila tha,ho sakta hain ye saalon pehle kise ne wahan time capsule ke tarah bury kar diya ho.
girl-accha to tumne is nikala kaise?kya tumne phawda use kiya.
anu-ah..i don't remember exactly but yeah something like that,maybe..😕 ah my head hurts.
girl-anu ise bajao na.
anu-sure.she opened it...a beautiful sadistic melody started playing.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o_SChDmSedM
trishna turned.she saw the music box and grinned.
trishna started singing-na na na...na na...na na na..na na na na...(same melody)
hearing her everyone started singing...na na na na..na na..na na na...na na na...
anu don't know why but was possessive of this tune,she only wanted herself to sing it and noone else but she couldn't stop her class.she stop the box and put it in her bag.
another girl-are anu bajao na,its such a soothing music.
anu-ah no...accha chalo antakshari khelte hain.
they were on a big bridge now.bus was in middle.suddenly anu's head started hurting.a
anu-aahaa..aah.
trishna-anu...😕
the lights in bus were getting on and off...steering wheel of bus started moving itself,bus driver shocked...
driver-are bachao...😲
and the bus fall down the bridge...(ouch)...
nupur in car-ah...she gasped...it begins now...that bitch,she did it.
ashish was in her car as well...
nupur-why you chose to come with me?
ashish-she can't be tamed without me.her powers can destroy an entire universe,do you think that you can do this alone?
nupur-yeah,but before that we have to save her from that ...
ashish-i know...we will need more people.
nupur-don't worry as far as i am there,she still can't hurt her.
ashish-lets go...
a mutant police person came to sunil's house.
police-ye kise telekinate ka kaam hain,kise tribe ke dushmani the tumse?
sunil-jis tribe se the unse hamne kai saal pehle he peace kar liya,aur kise bhe tribe se hamare dushmani nahe hain.
police-ye koi human killing nahe hain to yaha finger prints aur aise cheezon ka koi fayeda nahin.i think we should contact miss amrit toshi.
shekhar-amrit toshi???
police-haan amrit toshi,she is an excellent telekinate and telepath plus she has an extra power to track someone's scent,we should go to her.
jhanvi-where is she?????????
police-wo aapko jaane ke zarurat nahe hain,i will ask her,if she says no to aap is killing ko bhool jaye.amrit toshi to bahut generous hain,unke mom nupur toshi utne he sakht,waise agar miss nupur is case ko dekhte to better rehte,unke powers bahut he powerful hain.
sunil-inspector kuch bhe kijiye lekin us culprit ko zarur pakadiye aur zinda pakadna,use torcher kiye bina muzhe chain nahe ayega.
hrithvik-muzhe samazh nahe aata hum yahan alaska mein karne kya aya hain?
surya-master nupur ka order hain ke humein wo jab hamein bulaenge tabhe hum waapis jaa sakenge.
hrithvik-muzhe bhe rathod bana diya,wo bhe kahe ek jagah nahe tikta.
surya-rathod bhai to amazing hain,kya wolfy bante hain.he he..😆
hrithvik-hmmm...jab tum usse pehle baar mile the to tumne unhe patta pehnane ke baat kahe the aur...
surya-ya aur unhone almost muzhpar attack kar diya.but i was joking.
hrithvik-😆 aisa joke mat karna karo jisse ke probs ho jaye.
surya sits on his lap-okay,at you order my lord,they kissed.
hrithvik was reading and magazine and she was all cuddling him.
suddenly hirthvik started singing-na na na..na na...na na na...(exactly same melody)
surya shocked-huh...she gasped...
hrithvik-kya hua?
surya-ye tune tumne kaha sune.
hrithvik-bas mere dimaag mein maine yu he bana le,kyun?😕
surya-i don't like it,please never sing it again.
hrithvik-are par kitne pyaari tune hain aur mere original creation(is it really hrithvik??😆)
surya-i told you na,i don't wanna hear it at all.
hrithvik-okay okay sry,but don't get angry.
in afternoon...
everyone was at home,they were all very much scared by arnab's death.
shekhar-kaun ho sakta hain?
jhanvi-jo bhe tha bahut powerful mutant tha.
virat openes the television.he switched to abp news.
newsreporter-to jaisa ke aap dekh rahe hain is bridge ke neeche ek school bas gir chuke hain...
everyone shocked...
jhanvi-school bus???😕
newsreporter-ye school bus shimla ke liye jaa rahe the,ye school bus itne gehre khai mein giri hain ke kise ka bhe bachna impossible hain.hamein sutron se pata chala hain ke ye school bus st.xavier's school madhya pradesh ke the.(mp has forests so...)
everyone shocked...
jhanvi shouted-anu...😭she started crying.
maanvi-oh my god...anu...😭
shekhar and virat totally stunned.
shekhar-ye...ye kya bakwaas dikha rahe hain,aaa...aisa nahi ho sakta...
jhanvi had no hosh of herself,she went into a state of shock.
virat-manvi tum bhabhi ka khyal rakho,hum school ja rahe hain.

maanvi-di,di sambhalo khud ko...dekho ye koi aur school bus bhe to ho sakte hain...di ...di...but jhanvi was not in state to speak anything.
manvi thinks-di ne anu ko jaane he kyun diya...😕
in school,principal,media,parents everyone was there.
principal-dekhiye hamein bahut dukh hain is accident ka,police wahan pahunch chuke hain aur check kar rahe hain ke accident ke wazah kya the.
shekhar pulls his collar...
shekhar-tum jaise ignorant principals ke wazah se hamare baccho ke jaane jaate hain.
principal-dekhiye aapke emotions mein samazh sakta hun lekin ek accident ko mein kaise rok sakta tha.
virat-accha..😡aise ool jalool drivers ko rakhne mein tumhara koi haath nahe hain.agar mere bacche ko kuch hua to tera school band karwa denge.every parent was there was in state of shock,anger,distress,some were crying,some were really sad..
suddenly on tv...
newsreporter-breaking news,ye to sach much chamatkaar ho gaya.police ne dhund nikala hain sabko aur sirf bus he destroy hue hain,saare bacche aur driver ekdam safe hain.
parents were happy to hear this but also shocked ke ye hua kaise.
maanvi-di..di tumne suna...
jhanvi comes to her senses-huh...haan...😃
reporter-aye puchte hain bus driver se ke hua kya.
bus driver-jee mein gaddi chal ria tha ke achanak steering wheel apne aap ghumne laga...aur bas khai mein gir gaye par jee kamal ke baat hain ke hamme se kise ko chot nahin aye par ek durghatna ho gaye,ye hamare teacher jee trishna ke body ke tukde mile hain aur ek ladki anushka kapoor gayab hain.
anushka's family again shocked and sad.
police-hum us ladki ko talaash kar rahe hain,hopefully shayad wo hamein zinda mil jaye.
jhanvi-sobs sobs sobs..mere anu ke saath he aisa kyun hua??
maanvi-anu...😭
police called amrit toshi and asked for her help,amrit asked nupur but nupur strictly warned her not to help so amrit rejected.(i don't wanna write dialogues for his unnecessary scene)


next update title-my guaridan angel

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Cool FF. Waiting To Read More.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SilverFairy

Cool FF. Waiting To Read More.


thank you so so much silver fairy,i request you to read from start.otherwise you won't be able to understand anything.by the way you tumbnail is damn cute,love mouni.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
what could have been
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