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Posted: 12 years ago


anubis akhnaten-father of nephi and rumasha.will be seen in flashbacks.he is a short cameo.
ramensen-mother of rumasha and nephi.rumasha named nupur ramensen(nupur's real name) after her.

tutankhamun-a short cameo.was brother of nephi and rumasha.inherited the kingdom and rumasha killed him.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Chapter 11-sadness of a certain someone

Jhanvi,karthik and nandini went into library very quietly.they took the book ancestors.

Karthik-shall we start?

Nandini-hmm..sure'

Jhanvi-lets begin.

Yuuvi was finding nandini everywhere.

Yuuvi-nandini'nandini'.where this girl went away?nandini dear'.

Rathod was in his room remembering his memories'.

Rathod was drinking vine..

He reminds'.

A party was going on in the mansion.

Professor Vishnu was welcoming everyone alongwith ashish.

Vishnu-hello mr.sehgal,how r u?

Sehgal-I am good.how r u professor?

Vishnu-I am good.

Sehgal-oh ashish,look how big are now?

Ashish-you mean my biceps'he he'

Sehgal-oh you'.

Neeranjana was standing alone.she was seeing her husband talking to others and not paying any attention to her.

Rohan 'ya ya 'yes'he he'he was drinking vine at the same time.

Neeranjana came to him.

Neeranjana-rohan I need to talk to you.

Rohan made a face to her-ah..don't you see I am talking to someone.

Neeranjana became angry.

Woman-rohan you should go.

Rohan-no its nothing and he started talking to her again avoiding neeranjana.she had tears in her eyes.rathod was seeing all this standing alone in a corner.

Neeranjana heavily angry went to the waiter.

Neeranjana-one takila please.

Waiter-right here maam.she drank,one glass,two glass'she was drinking and drinking.

Rathod came to her.

Rathod-neeranjana'what are you doing?

Neeranjana full talli-he he he why?why you are here?go'go everyone leave me.i am happy alone.

Prof.vishnu saw it.he came to her.

Vishnu-neeranjana,he placed his hand on her head.what happened?

Neeranjana smiled-he he he'.daddy'she hugged him.

Vishnu-is she drunk?

Rathod nodded.

Neeranjana-daddy,why?why am I like this?why no one loves me?

Vishnu-no its not like this at all.we all love you.

Child shekhar came running..as he was running he bumped into nupur.

Nupur-hey careful kid.

Shekhar-oops sorry.

He ran away.nupur again started talking to a guest.

Shekhar came running to his father.

Shekhar-daddy.

Rohan-hey'champ..he rubbed his head.

Woman-is he your son?

Rohan-yes.say hello to aunty.

Woman-hey do I look like an aunty?

Rohan smiled'actually rohan and that woman were flirting which neeranjana didn't like.shekhar was more close to his father.

Vishnu-rohit(rathod)take her to her room.

Rathod-yeah'he took neeranjana.

Neeranjana-ah leave me,I am okay,totally fine.

Rathod-no you are not.lets go.

Rathod took her to her room.

Neeranjana started drunk smiling.

Neeranjana grabbed rathod's shoulders.

Neeranjana-you know when you proposed me and I rejected.

Rathod-huh..

Neeranjana-that was my worst decision.she had tears in her eyes. I am not happy rathod'not at all but I am with that monster(to rohan,oh neeranjana,your memories are erased otherwise rohan is a saint in front of rumasha,lol)he'she started crying..he only loves my powers,not '.not'.me'..she started crying heavily.she came more close to him.she grabbed his face.

Rathod started feeling pleasure'he grabbed her waist hard(he is a wolfy)

Their lips slowly came towards each other.they slowly kissed and then they started kissing hardly'''she started opening her shirt'..and he tore the back of her dress'

Hrithvik entered-rathod'

Rathod came out of his flashback.

Hrithvik came and sat in front of him.

Hrithvik-can I have a glass?

Rathod- I thought you didn't drink.

Hrithvik-hmm'.(sadly)

Rathod-I can understand your pain right now but don't entangle yourself In this.i am sure neera has some plans.

Hrithvik-what plans?why?couldn't she discuss them with me?why?

Rathod-huh'sometimes what you wish,you don't get hrithvik.

Hrithvik-what do you mean by that?

Rathod-I loved a person she betrayed me(reminding nephi's face),killed my son(nephi killed his son in previous birth )then again the same person betrayed me again(reminding neeranjana's face and her killing rohan and Vishnu).

Hrithvik-you never talk about your personal life,who was that girl who gave you so much sadness?

Rathod-YOUR WIFE.

Hrithvik shocked.

hrithvik-what?

rathod-hey she married you... poor her...i wanted to marry her..(in a funny tone)😆

hrithvik-phew...rathod,you are such a ...

rathod-crook..

hrithvik😆

flashback..

rathod and neeranjana were kissing...

rathod-neeranjana..stop..you are drunk.

neeranjana-drunk..he he he he he he...awww..you tore my dress...she closed the door with her telekinetic powers.they were in a separate room of a mansion.it was very quiet.

rathod was shirtless.

she started scratching his back...and kissed his neck...and then...they both started loving each other...they tore apart each other clothes...and neerajana committed infidelity.

(except anu all other nephi's forms are so cruel)

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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king abhendra-king of india,nephi married him and killed his son.he was an indian mutant.rathod's previous birth.

here is a photo of him and nephi.

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am thinking of stopping this ff due to lack of comments.looks like you guys are not liking the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Moni I was damn busy from last week.So I was late to comment here.Please excuse me for this and I am so sorry dear.Agli bar pehle comment uske bad baki sab. I promise😊.
As usual your updates are fantastic. 👏
👏👏👏 Keep going dear.👍🏼.May Mahadev and Ma Durga Bless you always.
And I have two doubts:1.Why Neeranjana called Prof. Vishnu Daddy??
2.Nephi and Neeranjana was cruel and infidel.And Anushka is exception!!😕I don't get this.Please do explain. And Thanks for the clarification that she is not infidel.otherwise this time I surely 😈
😈😈 you.
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And lovely pics dear.👍🏼But Nephi and Rumasha k Mom-Dad kuch zyada he odd lag rahe hai mujhe😕???
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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Hey Moni I was damn busy from last week.So I was late to comment here.Please excuse me for this and I am so sorry dear.Agli bar pehle comment uske bad baki sab. I promise😊.
As usual your updates are fantastic. 👏
👏👏👏 Keep going dear.👍🏼.May Mahadev and Ma Durga Bless you always.
And I have two doubts:1.Why Neeranjana called Prof. Vishnu Daddy??
2.Nephi and Neeranjana was cruel and infidel.And Anushka is exception!!😕I don't get this.Please do explain. And Thanks for the clarification that she is not infidel.otherwise this time I surely 😈
😈😈 you.


1-ah...vishnu removed suhani's memories of vikrant and saved her.after that neeranjana stayed with vishnu.she calls him daddy.

2-nephertini married indian king(rathod's previous birth) and killed her own child due to rumasha's curse.thats why she was cruel.neeranjana was infidel,she slept with rathod and killed vishnu and ashish along with some other people.thats why she was cruel.anu remained faithful and killed only those people who deserved that,sunil's blood bond was a manipulation,he didn't actually blood bonded with her.so...anu is far better form of nephi than other plus in anu's for nephi finally got married to her true love.

the reason of stopping this ff is not you,only 2 or 3 people read it.how can i go on writing so much then?😭 this ff is not liked i guess.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

And lovely pics dear.👍🏼But Nephi and Rumasha k Mom-Dad kuch zyada he odd lag rahe hai mujhe😕???


why????????????????😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
i will declare my decision of continuing or not continuing this ff on behalf of comments i get sometime later.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Lucy thanks dear for clear my doubts.😊And about your decission I don't think that people don't like your ff.But somehow they may be busy in their works or any other reasons they couldn't make it. But I think whenever they will come they must like your ff.Because your story building is very interesting.👍🏼

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