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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede

i know about your problem and thus i warn everybody to be very careful while reading updates.i know you wanna see other characters,but klitty,yuuvi,mohit and rathod are secondary characters,almost in stream with shekhar,jhanvi.these characters are like vishnu and saraswati of mahadeva,they will be brought up when necessary,the story of neeranjana has too much to tell that i barely get any ideas to develop these characters.honey please comment even if you don't like the update,if you don't tell me how will i improve it?

yes she is step sis of neera,means shekhar is dad of amrit and obviously of anu but anu is mother of shekhar.

i know this one is a very confusing thing but it will be cleared in last update of first generation.till then only you can speculate.


will surely let u know my POV on all updates dear 😃
Edited by hemaDaganKhian - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u guys,now the real story will begin,in end of first gen,i will write its brif synopsis.
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Posted: 12 years ago

chapter-5-return

Nupur ordered everyone to stay at home.

At 7:00 a.m.everybody was sitting in living room all tensed.karthik went to school.hrithvik had to go out because nupur advised him to keep nandini away(she was scared that maybe neera will have a breakdown)

Rathod,nupur and amrit were all scared.

Neera came down,she was wearing a very corporate type person dress.

Neera-what?don't you guys wanna go to the office?

Nupur-I ordered them to stay here,this guy claims that your parents are coming today.

Sunil-yes anu,you can't lie in front of your parents.

Neera didn't said anything but sighed him

jhanvi in car-kya sunil sahe keh raha hain?kya anu wakay zinda hain?

shekhar-ye to wahan jaa kar he pata lagega.

virat-muzhe lagta hain ye sunil paagal ho gaya hain.

maanvi-i don't think so,ek blood bond apne soulmate ko pehchan leta hain.

car stopped.

driver-yahe hain wo mansion.

they came out of the car.

manvi-woah,agar itne bade mansion mein hamari anu rehti hain to accha he hua wo kidnap ho gaye.😆

jhanvi shouted-maanvi...😡

as jhanvi and others were about to enter a speaker said(yes a machine)-voice identification test..

jhanvi-what?😕

shekhar went to the machine and said-hello,i am shekhar,i am here to meet sunil.

machine-voice test failed and big machine guns came out of the ground and were about to shoot them when nupur came out and she stopped machines by a remote.

as she was walking towards them she saw shekhar,she was highly saddened seeing him,she abstained herself from crying.

nupur-hello,i am nupur toshi.

shekhar remember that police guy(arnab investigation case)mentioning her name.

nupur-you are welcome.they all entered the mansion.as they were walking,maanvi was seeing everything with her mouth open.

shekhar thinking-i think i have been here before,strange.😕suddenly a faint memory came in front of his eyes.

a man have a hunter in his hand and he is saying-okay shekhar,now try to stop it with your powers.and man hits him but the kid stops it with his mind powers.

shekhar stops-huh...

nupur-what is it?

shekhar-i am sry but i think i have been here before.you know a strange dejavu.

nupur-😭 ah...yeah...come...

they came to the living room.

jhanvi saw everyone and then she saw neera.neera's face was very flat.😳 she saw her eye...

jhanvi so happy-anu...😭 😃,this is my anu.

neera-

rathod shocked seeing shekhar,he was very much dumbstruck.

he thinks-shekhar...,he still looks so same,no change at all.

amrit came to shekhar hiding her hears.

amrit-hello..i am amrit shekhar,ah daughter of nupur toshi.nice to meet you.

shekhar-nice to meet you too.

maanvi-anu...omg,you look so beautiful.jhanvi touched her face.she was all crying.

neera was still flat faced.yuuvi was all getting angry on this.

yuuvi-what the heck?😡why they are keep calling neera their daughter?

sunil-now you all believe i was right.

kitty-wait,neera hasn't said anything yet.

mohit-yes we are waiting for her to speak.come one neera,speak up,tell us if they are your parent s or not.

shekhar-anu...tell them,you are my daughter.

neera went straight to shekhar,she touched his face like a mother(omg what a creep situation)

shekhar-anu??😕huh...her touch was something that started making him very hot...her mind started hurting..

shekhar-aa...aaa...

nupur(in mind)-why master?why are you giving him back his memories?

neera-he deserves to hate me.

jhanvi-shekhar...

yuuvi-what is going on here?😡

shekhar fainted..

neera-rathod,take him to the room(she meant his previous room)

jhanvi-anu,what you did?

neera-mohit,take them to guest rooms please.

mohit find her words very commanding.like some very old mutant possess.

kitty,mohit and yuuvi were all confused.

yuuvi thinking-how?how she suddenly possess such commanding voice.

sunil-anu...what are doing?why you...ah...ah...(his head started hurting)

neera mentally told him-go back to the place you came from,otherwise...you won't be able to walk on your pathetic lags,you hag.

sunil-anu...😕(by the way anandi was not there,she was lost in thoughts of karthik in her room)


Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
god this neera is using her powers on poor sunil & shekar as well...

nice update yar, thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

god this neera is using her powers on poor sunil & shekar as well...

nice update yar, thanks for the pm


after all she is his mother/daughter.😆 ha ha ha neera is amrit's dadi and sauteli behen.ha ha ha..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
next update title- A CRUEL DEATH PART 3
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Posted: 12 years ago
so Shekar n Nupur r parents of Amrit(btw Jeevika knw tis 😉)its getting interesting Moni curious to knw wat'll Shekar tell after knwing his past n another cruel death who's tat lucky oops unlucky person😆no more of hritvik in this chapter n no ahem..ahem 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede


thanks for the comment honey,well noone is commenting on the video,looks like no one saw it.😆
'about the cs,sry honey it will only be after first generation only for if you guys still couldn't understand the story.




As Far As The Video Is Concerned...It's Awesome !! And I'm Waiting For The CS !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved The Update !! Really Scared Of The Title Though ! Waiting For Shekhar's Reaction After He Remembers Everything !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks to my all readers for their awesome comment.i don't know when i will be able to update next.stay tuned.sry if its little later or too late.😆

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