Originally posted by: shaani2209
Sorry for being late khushi...was busy "festival time"...that's alright!
part 6:
loved it...thank you for the change n cutting out the accusing parts by the gang...
loved swayam's dialogue n the way it affected sharon...
u have nicely written about kria's hurt...
holy lord shivam got the letters???😲 now what the hell is he gonna do
wait reading the next part now...
PS: in this part you have given sharon's color to one sentence which is said by swayam when he is inquiring abt kria...do check...thank you so much for your view on it! I'm really glad you did them all separately! Haha I always mess up on some coloring or another right? I'll try going back and fix it 😳 TY for point out!
part 7:
awesome update...painful but nice...
thanks for keeping it light hearted n giving some hope to the team dazzlers...
liked the way you have penned down the gangs reaction and vishaka walking away coz she cant pretend of being shocked...Sharon's concern for swayam though she dint say anything to him it was nice to read her feelings...
what the hell was that letter???? how can that be...wait m reading the next chapter...
PS: here in this chapter you have mis-colored RDX part with swayam's color(part where sir gives swayam the letter)...TY for your view again.. yes.. letter in next update posted.. haha again a mis color? I need to stay in reality and not doze off when I color code 😛
part 8:
woahhh what a twist khushi...
that creap changing the letter by adding stupid things...what else can he do???
loved the way you have kept kria and vishaka in contact...its nice to read that kria told vishaka abt writing a second letter which for rey...
what awesome brain's vishaka have... direct suspect, that too a correct one...and swayam and vishaka together will surely get love back in kriyansh life :)
loved the swayam teasing vishaka part😛
Phew finally i caught up with ur updates...update soon...
thanks for the pm's :)AND again, thank you so much for taking the time out to comment on all the 3 udpates 🤗 It really means a lot to me! I'm glad you're loving the updates!