#2 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 4-11 - Page 62

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi.14

really nice part...

relived that at least now may be rey will get to knw that kriya wrote a letter to him also nd she loved him...

loved swayam nd vishakha's convo.. how i wish something like dis hav happened in d3 also but anyways...

update soon...

thanx for pm...


Thanks! Yes, know someone knows and happy you liked the convo dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasogani8

😳nahi nahi nahhi nahiii regular update dene ka... vo kya hai na ma apne cell phn pe updates padti hu isliye reply nhi kr pati ye reply lappy se kr rhi hu... specially fr u😉


Haha I know you like many like the regular updates.. But I just don't want to be disappointed when the response goes down as many don't have the time to read it regularly.. thank you for your replies 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

Sorry for the late comment...
Coming back to update
really loved it
aisa kuch serial me hota toh kitna acha hota..
Cv kuch toh sikho..
I love to read regular updates..
Update soon
thnx for pm


That's alright dear 😃
Thank you for loving the update! And your views 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaani2209

Sorry for being late khushi...was busy "festival time"...that's alright!

part 6:
loved it...thank you for the change n cutting out the accusing parts by the gang...
loved swayam's dialogue n the way it affected sharon...
u have nicely written about kria's hurt...
holy lord shivam got the letters???😲 now what the hell is he gonna do
wait reading the next part now...
PS: in this part you have given sharon's color to one sentence which is said by swayam when he is inquiring abt kria...do check...thank you so much for your view on it! I'm really glad you did them all separately! Haha I always mess up on some coloring or another right? I'll try going back and fix it 😳 TY for point out!

part 7:
awesome update...painful but nice...
thanks for keeping it light hearted n giving some hope to the team dazzlers...
liked the way you have penned down the gangs reaction and vishaka walking away coz she cant pretend of being shocked...Sharon's concern for swayam though she dint say anything to him it was nice to read her feelings...
what the hell was that letter???? how can that be...wait m reading the next chapter...
PS: here in this chapter you have mis-colored RDX part with swayam's color(part where sir gives swayam the letter)...TY for your view again.. yes.. letter in next update posted.. haha again a mis color? I need to stay in reality and not doze off when I color code 😛

part 8:
woahhh what a twist khushi...
that creap changing the letter by adding stupid things...what else can he do???
loved the way you have kept kria and vishaka in contact...its nice to read that kria told vishaka abt writing a second letter which for rey...
what awesome brain's vishaka have... direct suspect, that too a correct one...and swayam and vishaka together will surely get love back in kriyansh life :)
loved the swayam teasing vishaka part😛

Phew finally i caught up with ur updates...update soon...

thanks for the pm's :)AND again, thank you so much for taking the time out to comment on all the 3 udpates 🤗 It really means a lot to me! I'm glad you're loving the updates!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

good morning ji!!!!!!!!!


GM 🤗

Wednesday there?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sreya19roy


Awesome update khushi...really loved it 😊

Finally "UR VERSION" of D3 actually started...n dude what an amazing start it already is 😃

Thank god vishaka understood the manipulation that creep did 😊

Eagerly waiting for the next update...update soon 😊

Sorry for being late n Thanx for the pm 😊


TY sreya! Yes, mine started 😳 I'm glad you loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alex714

sry i was out of station so couldnt reply ur updates were awesome as always and this story is going awesome i just wish there is no taani and the kriyaansh lovestory get an ending like any other fairytale


That's alright. I'm happy you like the updates. About Taani and Kriyansh, you will have to wait and see the twists I bring around 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: d3_rox

It was amazing...thank god vishaka saw the difference btw the handwritings...I loved the part when swayam understood thet Vishaka noe's abt kria!!!! he always understands everything!!!!!

N I die to read ur updates...so plzzz update regularly...!!!!!!!:):)
I may sumtm not be able to read due to heavy schedule of mine...as I am in the 9th...but will definately read n cmmnt whenever time!!!!!:)

-Tehmina!!!:):)


TY Tehmina! I'm glad you liked my changes! Will do my best in updating regularly! Hope to see your comments almost all the times 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Go back to sleep 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nirju99

hope rey got 2 know truth asap


He will soon...

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