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paawani

@NotKidding

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

La di i luv this ASR...he is too aweeesomeee...
N la di u r superb...:)

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lareefab

@lareefab

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ..Paawani..
La di i luv this ASR...he is too aweeesomeee...
N la di u r superb...:)

love you sweetie and thank you

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

hey Di,am so sorry that i am not able to catch up with your beautiful works. . .
i so wanted to read this one,and finally,i have some minutes to spare,so am here to read your fiction. .and i will comment on each chapter as and when i read,starting with the first chapter now. .thank you for all the pm you sent. .

🤗

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

just read the concept/chapter 1. .,
OMG. .,Damm cool.. .
what a start,Damm,why dint i start it first,never mind,better late than never. .
i was so shocked at the start,when i read ARSHI did suicide . .😲
hate this shyam and anjali,ARSHI dead still they drooling for money,how disgusting. .
just can't wait to read more,moving forward. .
(plz read this-
not that i want an index,i have kept all you msg of all updates,so its convenient for me,just for new readers i suggest an index. .so they can find the chapters easily. .
😉 pm me your index if you have. .)😳

Edited by trivedishraddha - 13 years ago

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

just read chapter 2. .
see,Arnav cares so much for anjali,and she,argh. .😡
well.sad that Khushi dint have a mother,but its k. .she will meet Arnav now,i guess. .
the lady helping the oldie who Arnav saw was Khushi,right?
wait.,let me find out by moving to chapter 3. .
😉

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

wow,done with chapter 3 . .
now i know why fate(la Di) decided Khushi's career A journalist. .😛
aur woh hawa ka udna. .wah wah di,dil khush kr diya. .😳

and Arnav saw Khushi's both side on same day,the other side was quite "UNBELIEVABLE" for him. .😆

yeh le,shyam ko langdi pehli nazar mei he bha gayi.. .🤣 o k,i gues she is not lame here. .😆

moving to chapter 4 . .😊

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

just read chapter 4. .

OMG!shyam blushing,😆 now that's something hard to even imagine. .🤣

anjali married and one year Leapthanks to la Di.i dint want to read their honeymoon. .🤣
just kidding. .

Arnav's father died.🤔
and Arnav's mom said DM,(lagta hai unki n Khushi ki khub jamegi😛)
n shyam said. .
Shyam: Rani Sahiba, math
Roh……
i said,toh kya bhajiya talegi!😛

and when lawyer announced the will,at that time Arnav cried. .Awww,he dint knew how much his dad loved him. .😔

now i know,shyam only pushed anjali's jealously and anger . .

happy for Khushi. .
moving on. . 😳

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

just read chapter 5 . .

Kushi: Aaj Breaking news
kya hain (Harshu ki bachchi
dis dialogue was especially
dedicated to you ;)
🤣

OMG Di,you should not have added the pics. . .am lost. .
it was hard to concentrate,but somehow i managed. . 😉

two things for this update,
1.Arnav asked Khushi wat WAS your name. .
2.ASR said plz!
great. . .

and Khushi got the interview appointment . .🥳

but this shyam and anjali-argh. .😡

and when i read interview will be long,i was

again,hawa chali. .

Arnav smirking and Khushi thinking all non-sense 😆

Arnav said pagli,i was ☺️
great that Arnav's mom made gave him a hint that he is in love. .😳

Arnav give lift to Khushi,and they again meet for Payal Aakash. .cool..

great update di. .quite long..
moving on. .

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

just read chapter. 6. .
when Khushi said-
Kushi: lemme handle his
bro
i was ☺️ and 😆

and Khushi called Arnav kameena!
and Arnav called Khushi as "aap. ."
. . .
Khushi faint and Arnav what the. . .😆

OMG,i had 🤣 of my life reading this chapter

now the cliff hanger of chapter 6 can't Damm tempt me,as you have already updated chapter 7,so am moving on..to know what will happen when-
"tip tip barsa pani,pani ne aag lagayi. ."☺️☺️☺️

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

just read chapter 7. .
and i so was wanting to read some gutter. .
thanks for providing that. . .😉
Khushi gettin wet and Arnav staring at her ahem ahem. .☺️
gutter alert. .[{:)]

and at back home,ARSHI lost in each other. .

and this shyam is back. .argh. .😡

when you described Khushi's beauty,my heart skipped a beat. .
and when you wrote Rabba ve in background,i was about to read rani sahiba. .😆

and that romantic dance,so romantic that they were so lost in each other from the world!it was just wow. .

,and now Arnav dropping her home . .OMG!
can't wait for more ha Di. . 😳
very well writen. .
plz do update soon and pm me. .
😊