ARSHI FF:ONE NIGHT STAND 2 (cr) THREAD THREE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

congratsss!!!! abtho humein cliffhangers kee aadat see hogayee hai...awesommme update...very very very well written...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Appy jst like ur title this update made me smile...I could sense that evrybody was waiting to get it more murkier and i myself was prepared for it but girl it was jst opposite to our expectations...u nailed it Appy...it was freakingly awesome update..

I jst loved how ASR reacted after his dracula act...his mellowing down was so unlike him... and the turmoil he was going through was much needed...chalo atleast kuch toh taras aaya khushi par...

Kya yeh koi aur tha..i mean he hooked her buttons and straightened her crease🤢

Khushi ka toh theek hai lekin yahan toh hum bhi confuse ho gaye hai...what is he made of😕 and he said sorry and hugged her...dude u seriously need a health check up...

And the hug...oh gosh it was so beautiful...both of them felt warmth in eachother's embrace...it was heaven

If all this was not enough u made this update even more interesting by adding khushi's comic antics..all her questions were damn sweet...

And his smile was icing on the cake...

Yes ASR unbelieveable is the only word to describe her...how can anyone be so sweet and forget the pain he had inflicted on her jst few minutes back...seriously unbelieveable...

Appy loved it damnit👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Appy_Indy

lolz 🤣 but before you teach me you also need to approval 😉 whether you are good enough to teach me 🤣

Yaar i wrote it jst to cheer u up...i know u as a person and i know what u were going through...i hope i made u smile...and damn the approval...i know i m good enough to atleast teach u