Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116

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afsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Nice part

Oops hop they dnt regret spcly Khushi

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segad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Lovely chapter from several angles.

One the descriptions of the festival are incredibly realistic and create the milieu.

Two, his volunteering his history with Lavanya makes it easier to understand his reaction to Akash-Payal. Once bitten, twice shy.

Three, the two of them together was a foregone conclusion. Too much chemistry under exotic conditions can only lead to one conclusion.

I think it is good that they both realized where they first met and that the first time they made love was free of the situations created by family that are sure to crop up. I only hope that Khushi does not end up in a similar situation to Payal. Given that the storm of family is likely to hit on their return home, what with Akash-Payal and then Shyam planning a visit, this might be all they have to hold on to sanity for a while.

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

The way you described the desert festival made me wish I was there... I could almost imagine it! 😆 Loved the romantic parts too! 😳

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Awesome update
But scared what will be the reaction of them after this

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

The description of the desert festival was mind blowing. I was happy that he remembered her as the girl who fell in his arms few years ago. He really feel the need to open up his past 2 Khushi & that was lovely. Their love making was passionate but I hope Arnav will not hurt her with harsh words once they are back 2 their senses.

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

RESSS* EDITED*

AAHHH

I AM PERMANENTLY IN CAPS LOCK MODE RIGHT NOW. NO JOKE.

But, I'll stop 😛

Holy mother of all thats Holy, what in God's name was THAT?

I'm not going to say I didn't expect it, becuase truth be told; I did. I did the moment Khushi realized that weren't heading back home.

What I did not expect, however, was how amazingly and mindblowingly you wrote this scene. The festival was beautifully described and I could imagine myself over there. Seeing every small thing you mentioned.

Frack. Woman. Frack.

My brain actually stopped functioning when I read their coupling. f**k amazing charlotte (Pun not intended) Just brilliant. Everything was just right. The urgency, the emotions, the arousal...it was all there. I could feel everything you wrote.

I have a slight query though,

Why was Arnav surprised when he discovered that Khushi was a virgin? Did he honestly think that she was a loose woman, or did he just forget in the heat of the moment? 😕

Anyway, brilliant char. Just wow.

Please dont torture us like you did for this update. Please. I will not be happy. -..- It'll be a vicious circle. Wanna know why?

When Im unhappy, I tend to screw up things in my Fic.

Which basically means that I kill everyone. 😛 Dont make do that. Because I shall direct a horde of angry readers to you 😆

Continue SOON. OKAY? SOON.

Yeah. Kay.

Cheers, Avi.

Edited by ArShifan1997 - 13 years ago

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smile1412

@smile1412

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Oh wow... That was magical!!!! Arnav is being cautious ... But wait ...what history do they have????

He realized she was untouched !! But a tad late, hmm?? :):)

But wonder what will happen if he comes to know the real reason behind her coming away with him on that trip!!! Lots of fireworks ahead!!!!!

Just pray khushi doesn't get pregnant!!!!!! That will be the last straw!!!

This is really getting very very very intriguing!!! So many possibilities... So much potential does this story have!!

Great going Charlotte !!! Thnx for the pm!!

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arhifrvr

@arhifrvr

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

lovely... ,=) but arnavs reaction after this fills me with dread... =/

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

wow!!! am speachless... everythng was beautiful... u gav us sch a perfct description of d fair , of everythng... their love mking was sensoully described... but i nevr thought thy will complete it...hmm

nd also i nevr expected him to open up to her... he is so comfrtble wd her...i hop he realises tht... and am really really scared abt d next update... omg , hows arnav sigh raizada gnna react... khushis hrt is gnna b broken i fear...oh god!!!!!