Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 - Page 3

OMG wat just happened!!!!

Fabulous update... Finally she succumbed to her heart,she did it out of love and what abt him? He is strongly attracted to her but will his past experience let him take the plunge remains to be a big question... Eagerly awaiting the next part to see how they interact with each other after taking such a big step.

Very nice I can say lovely... The way u write is amazing.. I had wondered who had he seen that day in desert.. Great he remembered and connected..excited to read the next part..

I have been meaning to comment on your story for a while now but alas been tied up. This time around I had to.
Your story is beautiful. The build up from the first scene of khushi n Arnav at the memorial to this day when they talk, is just amazing. It's like a crescendo. Brilliant writing. How You describe Rajasthan and their culture n place is just so beautiful. The colors, the vibrance, the celebration, the desert yet the peace, the calmness yet the activity.. Its all so palpable. It's like watching it yourself. You can guess I have not been to Rajasthan so am seeing it from your eyes and I can see its so beautiful.. Now is only I had a guide like Arnav ;) lol!
I wonder how Arnav will react when he knows what khushi was up to. Would it turn at 360 against her? I have a bad feeling about this. And god bless if she gets pregnant with this.

Wow..that was great...Hmmm wonder why Arnav said not to let heart rule over mind...is that hint of what will follow. But khushi seems to assume its one sided love...after today what will be her reaction. Is Arnav really a changed man ? Or will the mind still play around and mess things up. Man, each of your updates leaves me craving for the next part. Them finally identifying the mystery girl and man from first encounter was beautiful.

Congrats on the new thread and yet again another food chapter please update soon :)

and after reading it 4 times already, I think I am back in my senses to pen my thoughts on the update.. so here it goes-

ahh.. Arnav... u soo want Khushi to see the humane side of you.. all the anger, all the walls you have build around you, now seem to be a hindrance in what you want to achieve. Attack is the best form of self defense, and that is what you have been upto all these years.. protecting your vulnerabilities. But Khushi's magic hit you hard, and for once, just once, you want to come clean and possess the woman who's been haunting you for a while. I do really wish to know what Arnav was thinking since the day before to tonite's culmination-- he wanted to give a chance to Payal-Aakash i believe.. and then today happened.. what were you thinking the past entire day Arnav? when Khushi 'apparently' changed her mind about the deal and asked to accompany you.. when she changed into that beautiful Ghagra.. when today happened?
and the million dollar question for us readers - what are you going to do now?

Why do I think (or may be I want to believe) that Khushi's real intentions of tagging along wouldn't (shouldn't) be taken as much of a treachery? That Arnav would have guessed anyway. .. urghh such a mess!
Ofcourse this turning point in their relationship is gonna see new characters soon now, right? What with Mami, Nani and Shyaam coming back to the scene? Things are gonna get complicated. And as usual, we readers pitch really hard for Khushi's happiness.

Waiting for your next update :)

Originally posted by: farheen75

Fabulous update... Finally she succumbed to her heart,she did it out of love and what abt him? He is strongly attracted to her but will his past experience let him take the plunge remains to be a big question... Eagerly awaiting the next part to see how they interact with each other after taking such a big step.