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Vee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

74 mor pgs 2 go!!! Gee up m bootyfuls... Lts spam so dat rafa cn updte. She demnd... N v suply. Lts gooo!!!!! <3

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

I luv u damit, A. U rite too good.

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Preeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

yayy 🤔 d bst eva

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curiousbookworm

@curiousbookworm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Guys! I know you are all good writers! Trust me I read your FFs! I too get annoyed when people don't use vocabulary, proper grammar, spelling , or punctuation! But it's not nice to make fun of those who do write like this ... They try their best they really do! Some people know better - others don't... You can offer help but don't just call them out like this!

PS: I still love you all beyond words and your writing! So don't be hating on me :D

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HeadOverHeels

@HeadOverHeels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

I'm a silent reader, and don't comment on FFs, but today I just had to break my silence, because... I just love this story!

It is hands down one of the best pieces of writing I've seen on IF. Remarkable really, how the story begins and simply grabs your attention right from the first line.

The setting, well that just jumps right out at the reader doesn't it? And then it flows so beautifully (the glass door which separates the room from the pool is a wonderful example of that. I mean I could actually see the door, the beautiful, clear and daily cleaned glass... So descriptive.)

And, then the characterization... My God! I really have no words to describe how well molded the characters are, their speech patterns, each act, each thought, so well penned. It made me feel who they are, and relate to them like I've probably never related to people even in real life.

Which brings me to the absolutely gut wrenching, and heartbreaking scene I could barely read through the blur of tears in my eyes, from all that love, passion and anguish which was portrayed so realistically.

I'm really at a loss for anything more to say, so please just add me to your buddy list and PM me when you update. I'd really appreciate that, even though I won't comment again, what with being a silent reader and all.

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: HeadOverHeels
I'm a silent reader, and don't comment on FFs, but today I just had to break my silence, because... I just love this story!

It is hands down one of the best pieces of writing I've seen on IF. Remarkable really, how the story begins and simply grabs your attention right from the first line.

The setting, well that just jumps right out at the reader doesn't it? And then it flows so beautifully (the glass door which separates the room from the pool is a wonderful example of that. I mean I could actually see the door, the beautiful, clear and daily cleaned glass... So descriptive.)

And, then the characterization... My God! I really have no words to describe how well molded the characters are, their speech patterns, each act, each thought, so well penned. It made me feel who they are, and relate to them like I've probably never related to people even in real life.

Which brings me to the absolutely gut wrenching, and heartbreaking scene I could barely read through the blur of tears in my eyes, from all that love, passion and anguish which was portrayed so realistically.

I'm really at a loss for anything more to say, so please just add me to your buddy list and PM me when you update. I'd really appreciate that, even though I won't comment again, what with being a silent reader and all.

I have to give up my proper English to say this, but damn! That's the longest comment I've ever seen you write!

It's a done deal! I am switching over to the quickie style!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: HeadOverHeels
I'm a silent reader, and don't comment on FFs, but today I just had to break my silence, because... I just love this story!

It is hands down one of the best pieces of writing I've seen on IF. Remarkable really, how the story begins and simply grabs your attention right from the first line.

The setting, well that just jumps right out at the reader doesn't it? And then it flows so beautifully (the glass door which separates the room from the pool is a wonderful example of that. I mean I could actually see the door, the beautiful, clear and daily cleaned glass... So descriptive.)

And, then the characterization... My God! I really have no words to describe how well molded the characters are, their speech patterns, each act, each thought, so well penned. It made me feel who they are, and relate to them like I've probably never related to people even in real life.

Which brings me to the absolutely gut wrenching, and heartbreaking scene I could barely read through the blur of tears in my eyes, from all that love, passion and anguish which was portrayed so realistically.

I'm really at a loss for anything more to say, so please just add me to your buddy list and PM me when you update. I'd really appreciate that, even though I won't comment again, what with being a silent reader and all.

The only saving grace about such...err writing is that they dont have comments like these! Please dont undermind the only thing which keeps me sane when I see the number of 'Likes' and comments on such 'writing'! ;) :D