D BEST FF EVR- PLZ DO READ, LYK N COMMNT(16+ ONLI) - Page 20

Originally posted by: tiya229

Di

whn u updatewa?

M die if u dnt updatewa!

Plzz di

M wantin 2 c ArHi wid da boootiful babe..

Plzz evry1 kp da cummnts cumming.. Arnav bhaiyya ki kasam...

bt hy, dnt wryte da xplicit stuffing abt da kisses... lyk me der r mny kidz on da pHOreum...

Hope u dnt mind😉

thnx 4 da supprt.

Originally posted by: HeadOverHeels

I'm a silent reader, and don't comment on FFs, but today I just had to break my silence, because... I just love this story!

It is hands down one of the best pieces of writing I've seen on IF. Remarkable really, how the story begins and simply grabs your attention right from the first line.

The setting, well that just jumps right out at the reader doesn't it? And then it flows so beautifully (the glass door which separates the room from the pool is a wonderful example of that. I mean I could actually see the door, the beautiful, clear and daily cleaned glass... So descriptive.)

And, then the characterization... My God! I really have no words to describe how well molded the characters are, their speech patterns, each act, each thought, so well penned. It made me feel who they are, and relate to them like I've probably never related to people even in real life.

Which brings me to the absolutely gut wrenching, and heartbreaking scene I could barely read through the blur of tears in my eyes, from all that love, passion and anguish which was portrayed so realistically.

I'm really at a loss for anything more to say, so please just add me to your buddy list and PM me when you update. I'd really appreciate that, even though I won't comment again, what with being a silent reader and all.

Originally posted by: inspiringstars

y no upd8 mate?

u no writing?

pls dnt kip us w8ing!

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

Nooo yaar

Y u pusing hr?

She no hv 100 pg rgt?

We nd to gt hr 100 pgs. ten she updt!