OS: FAITHFULLY

mysticmanthri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

bless you...

u r so wonderful to write a simple idea of a hubby returning home for his wife becoz she is scared into such a sweet story ...

thou idea is a bit filmy the way u write always tugs somewhere deep..wonderful...this what makes u essentially u ...u just connect with ur readers with such a tender treatment to story telling...

to cut story to short loved the os as always...

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duncanelise

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

That was so wonderful!

I'm really running out of words to use when I comment in your writing... Everything is just so... Perfectly described!

I loved the part when she reassured him that she hadn't felt scared on their wedding night.

Absolutely beautiful!

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awww I feel for her. Poor girl, missing her husband, and I understand how it feels.

Thanks for the PM.

It was beautiful!

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summaiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

so sweet updt

thanks for pm

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awww that was real beautiful the ending was real cute

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Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

B!!! Lookie here!! Me reads, Me comments now! 😃

Wowiiiee!! What a beautiful Concept (as usual Hmph!)!! B, seriously. You're gonna have to answer my man for the great expectations I'm gonna have from him! Because he'll have to be sweet Just like Your Arnav here is... Or Maybee, I'll just take this one home with me. Yeah? 😃

Awww!! He came back from Turkey, to take her with him! And the description about his loneliness- and the reason behind his success as a Business man, his obsession with work- only defeated by the obsession he has with his Wife😉, and her need for him- her shame to ask anyone else to be with her for the duration that he isn't there, her hesitation to ask him, teel him what's troubling her, and the way she understands his silence... *sigh* Perrrfect! True Soul Mates! *Dreamy sigh*

Amazing. Gorgeous. Beautiful.

As Always! (Hmph! Hmph, I say!)😆

Loads of Love Hon!

G <3

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

beautiful os well written loved their longing to be with each other so sweet yet so sad at the same time loved it glad he came to take her with him and loved how she knew what he was thinking when she told him she wanted lights by the pool awesome thanks for the pm

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blayde

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

The need they have for each others' comfort and proximity is just so beautiful. And again, their silent communication tactics in understanding each other's unspoken words and underlying meanings just shows further how deeply they're connected. Beautifully expressed & written!

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tasid1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Hey B, very very nice and touching OS. I love yr style of writing.. The imagery is beautiful... The emotions are also captured very well. Very eloquent.. THNKS for the pm... I always look forward to yr writings.. Keep it up...

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tasid1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Hey B, very very nice and touching OS. I love yr style of writing.. The imagery is beautiful... The emotions are also captured very well. Very eloquent.. THNKS for the pm... I always look forward to yr writings.. Keep it up...

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