Arhi : This Time Forever ~ Chapter 6 ~ 18/03

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

great update..
n whats with avinash? 😲
i would not like to see him as a character like shyam..n i hope he is not,,
may be he was talking with his daughter!! 😳
ok ok giving a break to my imagination.. 😛
lovely work done by both of you...
looking forward top read more.. :)

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

awesome... the love is there...

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Brilliant update, beautifully written. So Khushi is dreaming about Arnav and can remember him, awww she still has the mannat ki chabi. Poor Anjali is trying her best, but her husband just cannot trust her and please don't tell me he is cheating on Anjali, she will be heart broken. Poor Arnav was restless when Khushi didn't turn up and the care and affection he showed her that was beautiful. So Khushi is also getting affected by Arnav's presence, bless her, her heart does not stand a chance. Continue soon and please PM when you update xx

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bhavnah

@bhavnah

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Awesome update... Loved it 👍🏼

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Syeda Buraira

@cj-the-fool

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!! Obviously for writing something so brilliant...Read all chapters in a go...Awesome concept...I absolutely love the whole amnesia plot...I absolutely adore Payal...i always thought the writers in ipkknd didn't do justice to her character. She is not just a timid, docile, typically traditional bahu. She is fiercely protective of her sister and loves her very much...I like this new Akash too...At least here he seems to have a backbone...he is also an underestimated character...i always thought theres more to him than meets the eye...love your story...Avinash and Anjali bit was surprising but very much appreciated...now dearest poojali gets to feel a smidgen of khushi's pains and sufferings...I dont hate anjali on the contrary i like her except when she is doing shyam pooja...Take care

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

oh am so in love with this part esp where Khushi took the key and says love you.

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dprover

@dprover

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

like your story and writing style. read thru all updates in one go.

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Thanks for the PM. Loved the update. Awesome.

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

LYRAA+ HARSH=WONDERFUL UPDATE

WELCOME LYRAA

THIS CHAPTER SPOKE ONLY ABOUT ARNAV N HIS FIGHT WITHIN

HE IS THE''ARJUN'' OF TODAY

CONTEMPLATING BUT HIS TARGET IS SO VERY CLEAR

THANKS GIRLS

CAN'T TELL YOU HOW I FEEL WHEN I READ THIS EXCELLENT

WORK FROM YOU 2

KEEP ME ALERT

KKKA

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Avni Raju

@JennyAvni

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#480

Wow u r back [:D/] loved the update ..Thanx guys..so nice to see every char n love Arnav the way he is 😉 payaliya 👍🏼
Sorry for the late reply.. Life with a newborn is crazily busy 😉
Plz dint mind if I reply late or miss replying once in a while 😔