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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Edited my comment on pg 5. Sorry for being extremely late!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

This is truly a One-shot. The slow progression of a relationship which you captured beautifully with each moment creating a story.

I think you have a very soothing and beautiful soul and that is why all your works that I have read leave a lingering effect of happiness or sadness with genuine satisfaction of having reading it. It just has this feel of innocence emanating through it.

Edited by peppygeek - 13 years ago

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

That was a beautiful story !!!!!!!!!
Loved it !!!!!!!
The way you described different stages of their life from Theor first meeting to getting married was brilliant !!!!!!
Loved the end !!!!!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Such a beautiful story!

Something so many couples go through... Yet you made Arnav and Khushi shine in the mundaneness of living a life everyday in the real world.

Beautiful 😊

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suger1993

@suger1993

Beginner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Loved the OS! 😊 so touching and very well written 👏

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

awesomeee oneee...

loved the wayy u showed their love towards eachotherrr...

tht was amazing...

their understanding their pains and longing ness to eachotherr...

her sacrifrising for him and him for herr was niceee...

thnx 4 pm😃

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meera

@jblueday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

i dont know what to write. it was simple yet so beautifully written. the storyline was different but seemed familiar. it was so apt to their characters. arnav being a workholic forget everything but at last love won😳 i needed some distraction from the current track going on the show and this OS was the perfect one!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

thanks for the pm dear and please update your ff's👏