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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

This was truly amazing, fantastic. Totally loved it. Thanx to Krani, I read it. Would like to read more of your work. Is there any index of your work? Please share if so.. :)

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

It was B. E. A. U. T. I. F. U. L.

I cried reading this...first, because of the pain of A&K parting away and then, the bliss of reunion.

Very well written. It's people like you who make the readers' experience worthwhile.

Keep up the good work.

Edited by avantika_2012 - 13 years ago

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Dreamcatcher

@Dreamcatcher

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Beautiful short story...very mature progression of relationship...which started as sweet and tender ...getting a little tangled ...few threads breaking when stretched ... but ultimately the bond of their love getting stronger...loved it!

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Wow that was amazing...awww he came back to fulfill her dreams this time...really a wonderful couple...and so attuned to each other and so in love...loved it...

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arshiyana

@arshiyana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

wow...in os u've describe their journey...

yeh...sometime carer will be the obstacle for the couple and they have to separate but u've made this story in beautiful ending...loved it

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Awesome !!! How we forgt dat our loved ones need out company n nt money to have a happy life :)

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Sona !! Its been so long since we last caught up ! And I miss you

OK dont glare OK ! I know Ive been missing for ages ! But I already told you Id be misssing for long !!
And when I came , and I read the OS ! Gosh ! Im so damn dead !

Do you know what happens when I start reading your work ? It just transports you to a different world ! And I know Ive said this like I dont know how mnay times before, but with each work of yours, you surpass yourself ! And it is this ability of yours to make me dream totally different things about Arnav-Khushi that makes me love you even more with each update/OS I read !!

*muahhh* Khushi and Arnav living and finding their dreams together ! It was surely a dreamy OS !
Loved it, and I love you even more 🤗

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Wow i am really speechless after reading this.. This's so beautifully written. Loved the way you had shown the complete journey of how they meet, fell in love, and finally able to achieve their dreams..
I am glad that Arnav's able to understand Khusi n how she had once gave up her dreams so that he could get his ..
Loved your work...