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Aashifa

@curledup

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Posted: 13 years ago

The privilege of being on the first page <3

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Would you like to know the beauty of your work? Do you really want to know? its the fact that even within one installment or one picture frame you capture EVERYTHING! and I do mean everything, their whole life, the start right to a new beginning has been dictated so wondrously I bow before you.

This right here is absolutely-god-for-sakenly beautiful. I don't think I have found something more perfect than this. <3 I love it.

-Aashifa

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

The was an amazing story. Even though it was a one-shot, you gave us the arc of progression in their relationship, and I feel like I have just been through a beautiful journey.

Khushi giving up her dream once to help Arnav achieve his, and him doing the same for her. The compromise, the understanding, the love between them was perfect!

We keep chasing our dreams everyday, never realizing that without the people we love around us, those dreams aren't worth anything. I am glad Arnav realized this before it was too late!

Amazing one Sona! Loved it! :)

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

oh my God, what a superb story sona - a completly different one from the rest - luved it to the core - brilliantly written as always - a superb surprise - an update and a new OS all in one day - today is a lucky day for your readers dear

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masam

@masam

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

I am totally awe-struck.
First of all, let me praise your display of emotions. Though fiction, but I couldn't stop my heart from feeling it all. Beautifully described and captivated.

Your OS, totally enraptures the importance of a relationship, of true love, of dreams! After reading it, I feel like hugging my beloved one, and never letting go.

Khushi's pain. Arnav's pain. I have tears in my eyes.

Fantastic job, mistyrains. Fantastic. xx

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norolim

@norolim

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Do you have even, maybe an IOTA of idea about how much I absolutely adore your work?

Your structure is amazing, the writing deep and substantial. It calls out to the reader's heart and makes them feel. Thats a beautiful talent you have there Mistyrains. Keep it. Treasure it.

This was just...beautiful. Threre is no specific moment that I fell in love with. It was just the entirety of Arnav and Khushi's heartening experience.

Wonderfully written, wonderfully expressed.

Just, wonderful.

Do PM when you write more! I would love to lose myslef even further in your writing.

Cheers, Avi.

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

That was sooo beautiful <3 xoxo

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

To say this was beautiful would be an understatement!

I just loved it. Starting from him being a tenant till the end it was beautiful :)

IAww Arnav gave up his job for her? So sweet!

Loved it!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

loved it absolutly beautiful...keep on writting

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

that was wonderful! I dont know how you manage to weave such stories! I always get lost in them.. not wanting them to end!! very nice os!!

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

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Different concept.Wow👏.Really like the way story unfolds, the way their romance, understanding,without any drama ,simply you said everything and didn't avoid not a single emotion and romance.👍🏼

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