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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

That was beautiful loved how they both sacraficed for the other as their happiness lied with being with the other person

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neena

@shadesofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

u always amaze me with ur writing...
beautiful👏
loved it!!1

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

So I know it's late but I am still res-ing it!! Will be back!

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Dude, that was beautiful!! Though it was an OS you managed to show the progress of their relationship! Their love!!
Right from the moment they met each other till realising how difficult it is to stay apart- a journey worth travelling!! The destination doesn't matter, it's the journey that counts!!

Beautiful OS, wonderfully written!

Edited by Jameelah52 - 13 years ago

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I believe that is the best written piece I have read from all the work you have shared on IF. So precise, luscious details, evocative. The world of dance is made even more sensual as it tells the story of their love. That first scene was styled like a fashion editorial--that is my language for saying that it was perfect in terms of image, text, texture.

Ah!--the story--it left me with kind of a wistfulness. Felt the need to walk away and make myself a cup of tea. I love what is says about art and those who are compelled to "do" their art--and also what is says about shared purpose.

Never forget to PM me...😊

Maya

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Ohmygosh Sona ! this was absolutely beautiful ! : ' D
the imagery, the characters, the plot.. the little tiny adoring, wonderful details.. the essence of it all ... I really really loved it to bits !
... had missed your writing for quite a while, and I am thrilled to read this piece of yours that is absolutely mindblowing ! Loved the endingg !

your rocked it ! :D

Edited by hilly - 13 years ago