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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

from the title to the end its so beautiful...its like wow...ur awesome the way u describe a person n the surroundings really ...this one is so nice cant say more absolutely brilliant...

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

It was mesmerizing journey of Arnav and Khushi, and i totally loved it...

Khushi giving up her dreams and life in Kolkata for the man she loves, is what we see every day in society...

But a man giving up his dreams for his woman is a rare sight... but Anrav did it...

Loved the story, as even in an OS you gave us a full glimpse of their love and life together...

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

perfect 👏

liked it

thnks for pm sona

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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Wonderful portrail of love between Arnav and khushi.

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Beautifully written. It was awesome 2 c both of them sacrifice their own dreams for their partner 2 achieve their dreams. I'm proud of Arnav who at last decided 2 be with his wife & make her dream come true.

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Swati

@Swati_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

The story was wonderful Sona...:-)
I loved the way both sacrificed their own dreams to be together...thats what love is all about ,hai na?
Once again i dont have words to appreciate your work...just would say you are amazing and i love you...
Take care...and please update the other ffs...

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

my dear GOD...
that was so beautiful...
i felt such a soothing happiness reading it...
it was rich deep emotions that a person would cherish throughout their lifetime...
this sort of stories r very close to my heart...
cause i always wonder what are the moments,emotions, memories that help u to hold onto a relationship years after years...
i personally fear the moment of life when u find everything so routined,u take everything granted --then what is the force to carry on the relationship with same devotion...
n the answer is diff for diff people...n i think when u find the correct answer that is one of the greatest achievement of your life...
the architecture of whole story was so attractive...n i felt u showed all the right things at the right time...
i cant help but quote this here--"smudging the vermilion of the lipstick a little"...how brilliant is that...hats off
u wrote it beautifully dear n i thank u from the bottom of my heart for the idea n for thinking it to share with us through your brilliant writing skills...

thank u so very much for the pm...:)

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disha7

@disha7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Aah teenage love!

loved it..

very beautiful 😳

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

That was...beautiful.

I am actually speechless.

Amazingly well written. So vivid, that I could imagine the colours, the dancing feet, her hair curling around her cheek, the doris, heck I could almost smell the food she prepared for Arnav!

This has to be one of the best OS's I have read in a long time. Hats off to you. Great work! :)