#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3

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Nikki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Awesome updates and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3

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Ameena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Awesome part 👏...

Haye Rey lost in Kria's dreamland ...

Totally a "Love-sick" 😆...

Oh so "The twists" have started 😉...

Instead of crying she called Vishaka 👍🏼...

Waiting to know what happens next...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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Sneha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Amazing Khushi :)

I can't believe Shivam would do such a thing...okay that was expected from him... :\

Her mom could have let Kria speak.

I love how Rey's sooo lovestruck and then Sharon being nervous and swayam being...just..him <3

Update soon.

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Amrita Sengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

I just loved this update..I liked the ReYam and ShaRey conversations a lot..and i am glad you included Vishakha..she seriously has the potential to become a strong character!

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shaani2209

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Read both the parts in one shot..

Awesome start...liked the way you have started by keeping the story as shown to us in the show..

in the second part loved the way you have continued from what was shown to, what you thought about n the change you got by showing kria calling up vishaka...

but one question the last line of the part 2 was suppose to be said by kria kya??? or it was vishakha only who says it???

thanks for the pm...

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swaronehad3

@swaronehad3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

hey nice upd8 dear 👏

thanx 4 d pm 😉

plz upd8 d nxt part soon 😊

n also upd8 ur otha 3 ff's soon 😃

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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

loved it...

that goofy smile on rey was so imaginable...

loved it...

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Pihu.k11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

M waitin to c d twist tht is coming next...
N m likin ur way of d3.. Its great!!
Btw i dint get d pm this time:( not fair!!
N u r there in my buddylist too:(
Chlo koi na it happns sometimes!!
Well waitin fr d next part n do pm me yaad se!!
N kindly check if m there in ur buddy list o nt as i send buddy req on 2 IDs under d name silvermist so dont know which one is urs.. N if m nt there thn do snd me d buddy req!!
N i loved d update:)

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ananya randhawa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#559

i'm glad you kept vishaka in the picture...

a good one though.

loved the way you penned down swayam and sharon respectively..

waiting for the next update.

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Araina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#560

Know what guys? me super happy! Part 1 went to 72 likes and 53 already in part 2.. less than 24 hours and... the comments are great as well!! I will update the next part today itself! *But my net is slow so it'll take me time in replying to comments*

Hang tight 😃 Long update coming... at least longer than the past 2 😛

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