#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3

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Araina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#531

deetha- replied.. Now me going to get myself some more food.. hungry from all the replying back of comments 😛

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#532

hehe kal aake spam karoonge abhi soyi nahi toh kal bohut kaam hai sab ghadbad ho jayega

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namylovkriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#533

i can visualize the whole scene that happend in the show after reading your update

teary eyes kria in her white dress sitting near her bedroom door ...ahaaa

pm me plzzz

hav send a buddy reqest to your new id

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Araina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: deetha
hehe kal aake spam karoonge abhi soyi nahi toh kal bohut kaam hai sab ghadbad ho jayega

hehe good night and have fun tomorrow 🤗

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Araina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: namylovkriyansh
i can visualize the whole scene that happend in the show after reading your update
teary eyes kria in her white dress sitting near her bedroom door ...ahaaa
pm me plzzz
hav send a buddy reqest to your new id

aww yes... enchanting scene.. even though sad...

will do =D

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namylovkriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#536

Vishaka in the scene

well this was not in the show

kash hota nayway i lovced the update

continue n update soon...

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#537

Khushi this is not done..

When i was nt der u have updated and see the totla pages it has gone without my comment..

i'm feeling so bad..

Sari koso mere net ko...

And now to the update..

This part was gr8..

I dnt know agar yeah hota tho D3 kahi top mai hota..

Loved the way u protrayed the feel after dance.

he dance was special to Kriyaansh..

and so cherishing is isnt!!!

And the Reyam talk I serioulsy miss the feel sometimes eventhough they manage..

Sharon lka call de ke Rey ko Earth calling ho gaya.

How fair is dat!!! Ha ha And She is nervous.It happens to all before any big event occurs..

Next comes the most avaited part..

Aaccha if i had gone by prev storyline I would have assumed Kria wil cal Neha but with what I have seen pasat Kria's departureI would hug you here to add Vish.A true friend must say...

And then to all the gloroes who made her update Thanks a lot..

Vaise bhi mai nahi thi..

Now to the part IJHD update nahi hoga kya??

I want to read that..Atlest TL to kar dho nah...

Did i ever use Thanks above ...Checking nahi hua... fine so I'm safe😆

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#538

Jo koi bhi yaha par spam karing koi IJD par jao.Mere dil se duaye le lo..Waha bhi use update le loh nah plz...

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Alina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#539

Thanks for the pm.
So the twists are already on the way. I loved the changes you made.
You stayed true to Kria's fighter character when she doesn't cry all nite and calls up Visakha to find a way out.
Also Swaron didn't go out with Shivam a night before FL Elims. In the show when the date was shown, I was also like "what, tomorrow is important day, go get extra sleep"

Edited by -Alinaa- - 13 years ago