#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#541

yayy!!! update finally i waited fr it till 2 am at night par nahi aya tha...

subah subah khola toh u hav updated it... thanx fr pm...
It was sumthing which v all wanted 2 hav in d3 actually bt leave it... at least u hav made it possible here.. loved it...❤️

u r an awesome writer i love all of ur works... rey's behaving like love stricken puppy was so cute i can imagine him like dat... i just got down d train in past ven rey used 2 b like dis all of kriyaansh cute scenes played in front of me..

kriya sad hai plzz usse happy kardo na...😔

lastly i loved reyam brotherly scene...

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#542

ah i can see twists coming up

please jaldi update karo khushi ji

cant w8 to read more

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#543

awesome update khushi

waiting eagerly for d next part

update soon😳

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#544

its awesome

liked it

u showed the story that wud have happened

hope ur guzarish is not based on bollywood guzarish.

*sigh*

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#545

wow khushi... i loved reading this part..

it was well written...

Sharon being nervous and Sharon thinking abt Swayam 😳

plz update asap and thnx 4 da pm 😊

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Hetal

@hetu29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#546

Awesum update...
Luved the changes made by u...
Aww.. Rey's part was cutee... 😳
Sharon RaiPrakash is nervous... Hehe.. 😆
Yay !! Vishaka is here nd kriya is being a fighter...
kash D3 mein bhi aisa hua hota...
But never mind D3 mein nahi toh yahi par hi sahi... 😉
Twist's nd Turns... Emm waiting for it...

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#547

part 1 and part 2 was awesome i just loved it and thankx kushi 4r pm

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#548

Wow. . . .
Awsome update. . . .
Realy excitd 4 the twist. . . . .
Jst cnt wait til the eveng comes. . . .
Update the nxt part realy soon. . . . . .
God. . . .
M realy exicitd 4 it. . .
Bt,1 iz bothrng me a lot. . . . . .
I hav added ur id tat iz silvermist in my buddy list bt u dnt snd me pmz. . . .
Plz snd me pm wen u update the nxt part. . .
Egarly waitng 4 it. . . .