OS - Why he killed himself that Day? Part 5 pg26 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Gazal terrific start honey 🤗

continue soon...muah 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: adithyan

is shyam going to die?...


U never know😉...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Thank u everyone for liking the first part of my OS...Thanks for encouraging me to write further...My exams got postponed till 15th September...so, in that celebration...i'll be posting next part soon..!!😉...probably by tomorrow or day after...but its going to be late night update...😳

Hugs,
Gazal...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: khand_du

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Thank u everyone for liking the first part of my OS...Thanks for encouraging me to write further...My exams got postponed till 15th September...so, in that celebration...i'll be posting next part soon..!!😉...probably by tomorrow or day after...but its going to be late night update...😳</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Hugs,</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Gazal...😃</font>

u upd8 soon too cuz m running 4 ur upd8 too... ;) btw, thanks ever so much 4 postin dat link in that forum post of mine... Mera bhi late night post hoga!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Dynamix215

u upd8 soon too cuz m running 4 ur upd8 too... ;) btw, thanks ever so much 4 postin dat link in that forum post of mine... Mera bhi late night post hoga!


Happy to help😃...will surely post it soon..!! Promise..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46


Hi everyone..!!
As promised m updating 2nd part of my OS...here it goes...Hope u'll like it as much as u liked the first part...😳


*Flashback continue*


She turned her face to see him...her eyes filled with tears of happiness...happiness to see him back...Happy to see Shyam back...


"Rani sahiba, what the hell u think u r doing..?? You didn't even think once about me?? I lost my Rajkumari, n now if i was late for even a second i would have lost u too..!!! " exclaimed Shyam.


"How dare u..?? How dare u to come into my house...without my permission...Get Out at Once u..!!! " Shouted Arnav.


"Had i not come on time u would have lost your Di, Mr.Arnav Singh Raizada..!!! " Shyam shouted back... " Tell me what good u did for your Di in my absence...THIS..?? Miscarriage???? " taunted Shayam..


"How dare u say that...u cheat...u creep...get ur hands off from my di's hand. You don't deserve her...her love...You..!!!!!! ", Arnav was about to punch him, suddenly someone stopped him.


"How dare u to punch My Husband chotte?? Respect him he's elder than u...ur jeeju!!", Anjali said...protecting her Dear Husband😡 "Enough of ur nonsense Arnav"


"DI?? Why r u taking his side?? Don't u remember he tried to kill ur brother...ur Chotte?? Your paapad ka tukda Di?? Don't u care about that?? " Arnav asked, tears welling up his eyes...


Khushi kept her hands entangled in his' to pacify his inner turmoil...very well acquainted with the situation he was going through. She might have been successful in calming him down...until...


"Di he cheated u...he cheated all of us. He doesn't deserve our love. Actually he don't deserve to live...he is such a cheap creep...low grade personality...a p**p...he is.."


*SLAP*


Something cut his sentence...n even his heart...💔..😭Khushi stunned...😲 She took a glance at that poor soul whose heart has been stabbed by his Own Di..!! She could very well see her Arnav finally breaking into pieces...


"Shut up chotte...just shut up...Another word n i'll forget that I have a brother also. I really wonder Chotte..what u did for me since Shayamji has left...Nothing , Nothing at all. Oh! Why would u care if u have your so-called wife with u. You had time for her...but for me u were always busy. This shows how much u love me Chotte..!! I always thanked God who gave me brother like u...but now i curse that time when God thought of sending u as My Brother, who only knows how to use people..😡!! Now u just Get Out of my room ", Shouted frustrated Anjali


Those words were enough to break his heart into indivisible pieces. The woman, for whom he hurt his love...for whom he forgot about his Own Life...was now blaming him for every bad thing that had happened to her, defensing her Creep husband. Khushi was stunned...broken like Arnav. She knew her Husband is already half dead. She could feel the pain that Arnav was going through.


Shyam smiled🤢, celebrating his success inside his heart, he spoke, " Rani sahiba , I think u should rest now...please , its not good for u to take any stress at this state. Salle sahab...Its better if u leave now...u r doing nothing but boiling ur sister's blood", Shyam taunted him again.


Arnav was Numb. He couldn't feel anything left inside him. Totally broken, shattered was walking to his room, Khushi supporting him...becoming his limbs. Today, he died again. He failed again, a comeback looser.



*Some hours later...*

*Anjali's room*


"See, i promised u naa that i'll bring u back n i did." exclaimed Anjali. " But i feel really disgusting to slap my chotte...i said really bad to him." Anjali finally realized.


"Its okay Rani Sahiba. If u r feeling so much guilty...ask for forgiveness from him. You know naa, that he won't deny u anything😡" Replied creep...enjoying , celebrating his comeback inside his heart.


"You are right..! " Anjali happily agreed, Promising herself to woo her chotte back...unaware of the fact that, it might be the last time she saw him , Her already Dead chotte..!!



Part 3 precap : "You didn't do anything wrong", She came closer n hugged him. She knew how to (temporarily) fill the wound. Is it Khushi or Anjali?



Ah..!! A bit longer work...I know this OS was filled with creepiness of Shyamli...but i promise next part of this OS is going to be treat for u..!!😉

Do comment n like...😃

With love,

Gazal..



P.s. : Sorry for any mistake..!!

Edited by khand_du - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Woah...buddies...PM sent...if anyone want PM for part 3 please add me as ur buddy😳

Happy reading..!!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Precap: its Khushi...very nice update...will be waiting for next...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
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Gazal,first of all tell me seriously,tu kitne saal ki hai?
your so small,and next writing so deep emotions!wow. . .hats off to my sweetie!
😊
now,as you would ate predicted,i hate Anjali after reading part 2. . .😡
did i read correct,she slapped him?
😕
OMG!
how dare she slapped him. . .
she believes more in that creep!
Arnav used the correct words for the snakewa. . .huh. . .😡
thanks to Gazal,k Khushi is there for Arnav. . .😛
Damm this anjali. . .
i know,its Khushi your talkin in the precap. . .😊
very well drafted. . .waiting to read more. . .
draft asap,and pm me. . .
keep it up baby. . .Muah . . .😉
Shraddha. . .😊
Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
thanks for the pm Gazal baby. . .will just read and comment in a while. . .
😃

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