KriYam OS - The Guillotine Promise

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awesumm OS aditi 😊

beautifully written 👏

really heart touching one

luvd it ❤️

luvd kriyam's bond

my one reason to watch D3 bt now...*sigh*

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Unbeliviebly awesome!!!...
Wow i mean seriously..one of the best kriyam OS i hv ever come across..the emotions were described beautifully...great work aditi :)..

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shru

@Fitte_muh_tere

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Oh...i didnt knw u write so well..
Its awesome.
N i luv kriyaansh n miisss dem a lot..
Promises r meant b broken...ryt..
Lovd it..
Thanks for pm dear.
Wil add painfullove

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awesome👏

beautifully written😃

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

its very beautifully written up...

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

It was just Wonderful 👏...

Loved the way u described their condition 😃...

It was Amazing 😊.

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

loved it to the core..

the kriyam magic captivated me..it was an out-standing attempt. no one has ever tried to go deep into the sort of relationship which they share. loved where you described their dilemmas both of them going through a tough phase..

i hope you write more such KriYam OS and not only OS but SS and FF too..!

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

I loved d way u describe d condition of two hearts.. Its brilliantly portayed.. Loved it!!

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rni_buddy

@rni_buddy

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

amazing piece aditi... really good!!! wish tis had happened in d3 too atleast a small part of our heart will be at ease to knw tat rey really luvd kria...