KriYam OS - The Guillotine Promise

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: kaba3003
awesome👏

beautifully written😃

thanx aish!!!😃😃😃

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

@asha: fine! don't u dare talk to me!

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Saurav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: aditi061

bhai aapko kya jaldi upar pahochna hai???????????

kidhar upar????? Terrace???

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: pratik54000
its very beautifully written up...

Itna bada comment bhai!!!!
main toh dhanya ho gae aapke comment ko pad kar!!!!
dhundne se bhi itna bada comment nae milega!!!!
ruko let me send ur name to Guinness book of world records

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

@saurav: upar bhagwaan ji dikh rae hai na? voh aapko hi kar rae hai! vahan par! vahan par apsara bhi milegi

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Roxxy47
It was just Wonderful 👏...
Loved the way u described their condition 😃...
It was Amazing 😊.

thanx dear...
i was really scared regarding this OS.
was expecting jutaas and chappals instead of praises

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: swaron_d3
loved it to the core..
the kriyam magic captivated me..it was an out-standing attempt. no one has ever tried to go deep into the sort of relationship which they share. loved where you described their dilemmas both of them going through a tough phase..
i hope you write more such KriYam OS and not only OS but SS and FF too..!

thanx dear...

God mera ek SS ka update toh mai monthly basis par deti hun! agar nae shuru kiya toh saare readers mujhe forums se dhakke maar maar kar nikalenge!!!😆😆😆😆😆

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Saurav

@Tyler_Durden

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

^seriously, i can do with some apsaras now tht i dont have one down here 🤣
par fir i wont talk much to bhagwanji there, i dont want apsaras to feel neglected, to unko bolo hi jyada na karen i m busy